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    It's what you like, not what you're like. Christopher's Avatar
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    twisted writings on your wall,
    feel the differences between us,
    if i walk by your all cleared up
    you destroyed every evidence of every crime
    every crime you commited

    the skies are dark cause i'm feeling like you
    high on every drug
    unreal, crazy shit flashing by
    now it's my problem

    freaking out
    inslaved by your addictions
    sick
    sick of everything you felt
    hear my voice talking in my head
    yes my voice not yours
    screaming at my soul.

    rock on the radio,
    my influence
    not yours
    your a psycho
    not a friend
    turning into a freak
    don't fill up my blanks



    :whistle: give me advice if you want to :wth:

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    Good work, the only thing is you seem to focus alot on the drug idea, so mabye using it in the title would be more suitable, because i feel like what you were trying to focus on by reading your title is overtaken by this drug idea. But that is only my opinion, other than that a fairly good piece of work.

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    It's what you like, not what you're like. Christopher's Avatar
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    Yeah you're probably right
    but it isn't like a "song" about drugs
    it's more about someone making the a person addicted to his bad habits
    wasn't that clear i know

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    It seemed to be very good to me.

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