No-Friend

[Christopher]

twisted writings on your wall,
feel the differences between us,
if i walk by your all cleared up
you destroyed every evidence of every crime
every crime you commited

the skies are dark cause i'm feeling like you
high on every drug
unreal, crazy shit flashing by
now it's my problem

freaking out
inslaved by your addictions
sick
sick of everything you felt
hear my voice talking in my head
yes my voice not yours
screaming at my soul.

rock on the radio,
my influence
not yours
your a psycho
not a friend
turning into a freak
don't fill up my blanks



:whistle: give me advice if you want to :wth:

[D_A_V_I_D]

Good work, the only thing is you seem to focus alot on the drug idea, so mabye using it in the title would be more suitable, because i feel like what you were trying to focus on by reading your title is overtaken by this drug idea. But that is only my opinion, other than that a fairly good piece of work.

[Christopher]

Yeah you're probably right
but it isn't like a "song" about drugs
it's more about someone making the a person addicted to his bad habits
wasn't that clear i know

[lpsk8er]

It seemed to be very good to me.