I can't take it I shut my eyes and can't get you out And all i do is fake #### I'm so consumed with doubt When your the only thing I think about Wish I could have just once chance or maybe one slow dance I know i'm not the coolest kid Don't know what I did I lay down at night and Have a fight With my feelings I'm consumed with all the real things When you leave my world ends And I know my heart will mend If I can't be with you I should be dead Why can't I ge threw this? Everything I say to you seems so bliss Just tell me whats wrong with me I could never change for you So love me for me BUt I'm still falling into you
"Everything I say to you seems so bliss" i must ask, "HUH?!" don't use a thesaurus to replace words because as you can see, it didn't work out. even if you used the right wording, BLISSFUL, it wouldn't really make sense. Everything you say to this person is heavenly? "I know i'm not the coolest kid" didn't you say this in another song? "Just tell me whats wrong with me I could never change for you" you want this person to tell you what's wrong with you, but yet you're not gonna change and you want them to accept you for you, right? so why bother asking them to tell you what's wrong with you? it contradicts. put more effort and re-read this stuff. songs don't take 10 seconds to write or do they?