This is a new song from my band. Push And Shove .::Verse 1::. Anger from the inside Its killing me, it makes me die I can't seem to escape its grasp You get me, you take away my last breath .::Chorus::. You push me You shove me (You throw me to the ground) You push me You shove me (You hurt me till there's no sound) .::Verse 2::. Powerless I fall to the floor Blood pours out of my open wound My body, my soul, I feel like I can sore Dead is what I will be soon .::Chorus::. .::Bridge::. (Scream-sang) Push away the feelings I hide Fear removed from whom I despise Shove the violence back at you The suffering, your pain, it's time is due
We haven't recoreded it yet, me and the vocalist just got done writing that. I will try to get that one on here, but since we haven't even played it yet it might be a bit hard.
Well the reason they aren't long is because... 1.) We are planning on making this a slow song. It's going to be medium hard...the riffs aren't going to be anything LP has put out from Meteora..but the usual punk riff... 2.) I am just coming out of writers block, and didn't have a bunch of input..I have the bridge, and the chorus. That's my work. But the verses is all him. 3.) A lot of songs I have wrote have longer verses, because they are played faster, but we thought a mid-tempo, slow song would be a nice change.
I see what you mean, Crawling. I'm writting a song with the chorus: I can do way better than that but, it fits the song. I'll still prolly change it though.
It's a part in the song that brings the first half and the end of the song together.. like the "I put my trust in you" part in In The End.