I offer sacrifice to the one who has imprisoned me to this body Let me not be kept to this being that I long to escape Give me the strength to take away this life to give me the courage to… Disrupt the course of this miserable existence So I will never know that I am weak, that I can’t go on… Remind me that death is what I want so when I am gone I wont regret it So that when I end this life, believing in no heaven or hell I will be alone in the abyss of my own consciousness Drifting through thoughts and dreams and hopes and beliefs Remembering those I lost and those I loved Knowing I will never see them again And my love, who once loved me… I will never forget the beauty in her smile Or the gaze of her eyes And once I am gone, maybe she will love me again But human pleasure is nothing to stay here for I will not stay to die in evil and sin Within the arms of sadness, all hope is lost like many have said. Edit: spelling correction
Damn, i have to agree. This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough* I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.
yeah, i love your poems! this one was another one of those good ones! looking forward to seeing more.
Damn, i have to agree. This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough* I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up. [/b][/quote] I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I've ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin'!!! *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs*
I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I've ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin'!!! *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs* [/b][/quote] Ah...I'm guessing you don't know who this is. I don't know if you remembe "Faaip de Oiad"... And I think I've read some of your stuff, lemme see what you've written lately.