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    I offer sacrifice to the one who has imprisoned me to this body
    Let me not be kept to this being that I long to escape
    Give me the strength to take away this life to give me the courage to…
    Disrupt the course of this miserable existence
    So I will never know that I am weak, that I can’t go on…
    Remind me that death is what I want so when I am gone I wont regret it
    So that when I end this life, believing in no heaven or hell
    I will be alone in the abyss of my own consciousness
    Drifting through thoughts and dreams and hopes and beliefs
    Remembering those I lost and those I loved
    Knowing I will never see them again
    And my love, who once loved me…
    I will never forget the beauty in her smile
    Or the gaze of her eyes
    And once I am gone, maybe she will love me again
    But human pleasure is nothing to stay here for
    I will not stay to die in evil and sin
    Within the arms of sadness, all hope is lost like many have said.


    Edit: spelling correction

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    Wow. I really like it. Keep it going!

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    It's one of your best poems.

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    Thank you.

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    Originally posted by lpsk8er@May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
    It's one of your best poems.
    Damn, i have to agree.
    This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

    I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.

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    Wow, thank you much.

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    Extremely H! Vltg3
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    yeah, i love your poems! this one was another one of those good ones! looking forward to seeing more.

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    Originally posted by D_A_V_I_D+May 20 2005, 05:13 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (D_A_V_I_D @ May 20 2005, 05:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--lpsk8er@May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
    It&#39;s one of your best poems.
    Damn, i have to agree.
    This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

    I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up. [/b][/quote]
    I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I&#39;ve ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin&#39;&#33;&#33;&#33;

    *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs*

    * Just fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave *

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    Originally posted by The sparkling diamond+May 21 2005, 03:55 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (The sparkling diamond @ May 21 2005, 03:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -D_A_V_I_D@May 20 2005, 05:13 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--lpsk8er
    @May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
    It&#39;s one of your best poems.

    Damn, i have to agree.
    This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

    I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.
    I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I&#39;ve ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin&#39;&#33;&#33;&#33;

    *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs* [/b][/quote]
    Ah...I&#39;m guessing you don&#39;t know who this is. I don&#39;t know if you remembe "Faaip de Oiad"...

    And I think I&#39;ve read some of your stuff, lemme see what you&#39;ve written lately.

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    Wow, amazing keep it up&#33;

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