Within the Arms of Sadness

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I offer sacrifice to the one who has imprisoned me to this body
Let me not be kept to this being that I long to escape
Give me the strength to take away this life to give me the courage to…
Disrupt the course of this miserable existence
So I will never know that I am weak, that I can’t go on…
Remind me that death is what I want so when I am gone I wont regret it
So that when I end this life, believing in no heaven or hell
I will be alone in the abyss of my own consciousness
Drifting through thoughts and dreams and hopes and beliefs
Remembering those I lost and those I loved
Knowing I will never see them again
And my love, who once loved me…
I will never forget the beauty in her smile
Or the gaze of her eyes
And once I am gone, maybe she will love me again
But human pleasure is nothing to stay here for
I will not stay to die in evil and sin
Within the arms of sadness, all hope is lost like many have said.

Edit: spelling correction

[Muri]

Wow. I really like it. Keep it going!

[lpsk8er]

It's one of your best poems.

[arT saveS]

Thank you.

[D_A_V_I_D]

Originally posted by lpsk8er@May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
It's one of your best poems.

Damn, i have to agree.
This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.

[arT saveS]

Wow, thank you much.

[fallenangel]

yeah, i love your poems! this one was another one of those good ones! looking forward to seeing more.

[Il inno di morte]

Originally posted by D_A_V_I_D+May 20 2005, 05:13 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (D_A_V_I_D @ May 20 2005, 05:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--lpsk8er@May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
It&#39;s one of your best poems.

Damn, i have to agree.
This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up. [/b][/quote]
I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I&#39;ve ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin&#39;&#33;&#33;&#33;

*coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs*

[arT saveS]

Originally posted by The sparkling diamond+May 21 2005, 03:55 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (The sparkling diamond @ May 21 2005, 03:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>

Originally posted by -D_A_V_I_D@May 20 2005, 05:13 PM
<!--QuoteBegin--lpsk8er

@May 18 2005, 01:58 AM
It&#39;s one of your best poems.

Damn, i have to agree.
This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.

I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I&#39;ve ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin&#39;&#33;&#33;&#33;

*coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs* [/b][/quote]
Ah...I&#39;m guessing you don&#39;t know who this is. I don&#39;t know if you remembe "Faaip de Oiad"...

And I think I&#39;ve read some of your stuff, lemme see what you&#39;ve written lately.

[Razan]

Wow, amazing keep it up&#33;

[arT saveS]

Thank you.