Save me please From this deteriorating being This hell I’ve brought unto myself This body I cannot escape Stuck in myself, myself I fucking hate Oh, sweet angel… With your wings of love That were once taken away And your body of warmth Save me and take me away Wash away, Everything. Everyone, Deserves to be Happy. Oh, fallen angel With your lust, And your rage Kill the almighty father And save us
I'm not sure how i feel about this. It is powerful and i fell that but for some reason it just doesn't have that 'WOW' factor for me. It is hard to explain but it is really good. Keep writting.
i really thought this was good but i agree with DAVID that it could be better. but the meaning behind it is powerful. a little work and this would be a work of art!