Somatically Dreaming A dream encased in white A freezing reality penetrated The now lucid dream stands alone Glistening with regret on a stage Reflecting the spot light. Rays of confidence Diminished by anticipation Left to bleed by themselves But not necessarily on their own The dream always remains Strained in the back of reality’s head Lurking in the shadows of doubt Whilst the beams of pride Beat to the rhythm of their own drums The silent hymn to capability hums And eyes so bright shine like orbs Repel the fear by a flick of a violent lash. Scenery painted beautifully with blood An illuminated stage brightly reflects Every emotion which nestles, merely shrouded in between narrow crevices of the wood. While the audience is kept in low expectation, The dream ceases to exist, and as the audience Is swept away carelessly, the theater remains.
Thanks for the compliments guys, I appreaciate it a lot. I wish I would've been able to say more about it but I was in a rush. I posted this while I was at school, and didn't have it written down and the bell was about to ring. Its kind of inspired by Phantom Of The Opera..if anyone caught on to it.
WOW, this is really great. You are extremely talented. I loved this poem, i'm just speachless. Great job!
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yeah, i just LOVED that movie, and i felt as if i was inside the movie. Great poem, the subject's fascinating and so are your lines. terrific work! i believe you are a very talented writer. this is just awesome. keep writing!