Somatically Dreaming

[ChooseYourPoison]

Somatically Dreaming

A dream encased in white
A freezing reality penetrated
The now lucid dream stands alone
Glistening with regret on a stage
Reflecting the spot light.

Rays of confidence
Diminished by anticipation
Left to bleed by themselves
But not necessarily on their own

The dream always remains
Strained in the back of reality’s head
Lurking in the shadows of doubt
Whilst the beams of pride
Beat to the rhythm of their own drums

The silent hymn to capability hums
And eyes so bright shine like orbs
Repel the fear by a flick of a violent lash.

Scenery painted beautifully with blood
An illuminated stage brightly reflects
Every emotion which nestles, merely
shrouded in between narrow crevices of the wood.

While the audience is kept in low expectation,
The dream ceases to exist, and as the audience
Is swept away carelessly, the theater remains.

[MeLiS_]

good job, i love it..

[sickcycle]

Brilliance personified, great job, with wonderfuly descriptive words, and a less used subject.

[fallenangel]

i really like this! love the last three lines!
brill

[ChooseYourPoison]

Thanks for the compliments guys, I appreaciate it a lot. I wish I would've been able to say more about it but I was in a rush. I posted this while I was at school, and didn't have it written down and the bell was about to ring.

Its kind of inspired by Phantom Of The Opera..if anyone caught on to it.

[D_A_V_I_D]

WOW, this is really great.
You are extremely talented.
I loved this poem,
i'm just speachless.
Great job!

[Il inno di morte]

Originally posted by HybridMinoda@Apr 7 2005, 02:20 PM
Thanks for the compliments guys, I appreaciate it a lot. I wish I would've been able to say more about it but I was in a rush. I posted this while I was at school, and didn't have it written down and the bell was about to ring.

Its kind of inspired by Phantom Of The Opera..if anyone caught on to it.

yeah, i just LOVED that movie, and i felt as if i was inside the movie. Great poem, the subject's fascinating and so are your lines. terrific work! i believe you are a very talented writer. this is just awesome. keep writing!

[Il inno di morte]

Originally posted by HybridMinoda@Apr 7 2005, 02:20 PM
Its kind of inspired by Phantom Of The Opera..if anyone caught on to it.

yeah, i just LOVED that movie, and i felt as if i was inside the movie. Great poem, the subject's fascinating and so are your lines. terrific work! i believe you are a very talented writer. this is just awesome. keep writing!