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    A noi si schiude il ciel... Il inno di morte's Avatar
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    To my dear friend "hate"

    You know who I am, you know me by name
    I've never seen your face,
    but I'll never stop feeling your hand on my shoulder.
    You were always by my side when I wanted to run away.

    Guilt and insecurity shielded you.
    Naivety and ignorance fed you.
    Tears and anger caressed you.
    Sadness and pain admired you.

    Master of fearful minds.
    Owner of the blood we spill all over a carpet of doubt.
    Creator of this monstrous and careless creature.
    Sickness that chokes all possible feelings.

    Sore stab that eats my soul 'til I'm barely human,
    I can't remember the first time I smelled your smile.
    But in this single letter, my friend,
    I just want to tell you how much I dread to know the main part of my spirit...


    ***********

    (dedicated to:
    D_A_V_I_D - my writing mate & buddy , to
    theazninvasion68- who always makes me laugh my ass off and to
    Coshe - the sweetest inspiration when it comes to love)


    I hope you guys enjoy it and tell me what you think about it

    * Just fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave *

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    It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. Theazninvasion68's Avatar
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    lol thx

    thats really nice poem!
    kinda is what ive gone thur in october


    Sólin mun skína fyrir okkur
    grasiđ verđur grćnna fyrir okkur
    blómin munu blómstra fyrir okkur
    og ástin mun varaađ eilífu..


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    Human emotions.. so complicated to explain, but surely u´ve found a way.thanks sparklin

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    Cool,the more I read your stuff the more I am feeling that you are getting better by the day,but I am curious to know about that dedication,is it that those people inspired you to write the poem or its just a dedication to those people of a poem written before.

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    Nice one. it was short but i didnt need to be any longer as you said what needed to be said. I LIKED IT. i especially liked the 2nd verse. keep it up.

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    Wow. Me likey.

    Aitäh Muri (Hundiraev)! (Picture taken from Metsatöll's website)

    Formerly known as El Huginno.

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    i like the main meaning.. B)

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    Originally posted by ahamLP@Apr 5 2005, 11:37 PM
    Cool,the more I read your stuff the more I am feeling that you are getting better by the day,but I am curious to know about that dedication,is it that those people inspired you to write the poem or its just a dedication to those people of a poem written before.
    well, about the dedication, those are people who are really close to me, and i decided to dedicate this poem to them. They kind of made it easier for inspiration to come, and i really appreciate it. thats why i mentioned those people. to let them now they're with me on every single line i write.

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