Suicide Letter

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    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

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    This is a song I wrote when I was going through the roughest times of my life. Fortunately, I overcame all of it and was able to write the final version of this song. Thanks.


    I just wish things were like they use to,
    Now I'm struggling just to pull through,
    I don't know if I can live like this anymore,
    Everythings just fell apart like it did before
    Just another day to fail at everything in reach,
    To prove to myself that I'm just too weak,
    Because even when I finally face myself,
    I'll just get ####ed over by someone else

    I'm suicidal,
    I don't think I have anything left,
    I'm ready to take my last breathe

    I just want to make it through a day without having to mend,
    Always trying to step as far away from reality as I can,
    Instead of facing my problems, I just ran,
    Should have known it would catch up to me,
    I'm finding myself In a postion I thought I would never be,
    And as the days go by I realize I'm running out of time,
    (And I fail again...)
    I look in the mirror and realize I don't want to be who I am,
    But yesterday is gone,
    Todays a new day,
    But the situation is the same as before
    Looking in the mirror while my tears hit the floor,
    I question if I can go on anymore?
    I've felt this for so many days,
    Still, I try to convince myself that it's just a faze,
    But I feel like I'm falling out of place

    I'm suicidal,
    I don't think I have anything left,
    I'm ready to take my last breathe

    For so long, I tried to shove it aside,
    Didn't know what it would bring or what I would find,
    And before I knew it, it all caught up to me,
    Putting me In a postion I thought I would never be,
    Still trying to face what I tried to pretend didnt exist,
    Searching for a way where I can put all the tension to rest,
    Where I can get away from all of this stress...
    and now I just need you to help me get through this,
    But your too busy with your own mess
     
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    Rybullet

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    nice work..... I like the lyrics they are very deep and from what you said I know that they are very true......... :D :D :D :D
     
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    Pinkin Lark

    Pinkin Lark Prince of Persia.

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    wow man...i dont know what to say, those are real deep lyrics. very nice job
     
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    erasethepain

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    Thanks for the feedback guys! It means a lot.
     
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    Shinji

    Shinji Illuminate

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    well done !!!!!!! :lol:
     
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    arT saveS

    arT saveS Y2K

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    All I can say is....
    Wow...That's awesome, Really man its great. Yet once again the swearing gets in the way of the seriousness, but I mean besides that its just wow...
     
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    erasethepain

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    Thanks. Im gonna take your advice and try not to cuss as much. Im gonna post a song where I dont cuss at all.
     
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    erasethepain

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    I don't want to bump this but I want more people to reply to it. :)
     
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    Methybrea

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    Well done J Money...I wonder if Chester or Mike gets ideas from the Lyricists Corner! :lol: Yeah right, I know, but if they did, I'm sure they'd jot this one down its that good! J Money can you put some comments on Epitome for me? TY!
     

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