You're drifting away Its been so long Since you've been here by my side Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone I remember hearing your voice, lost again Your whisper drawing further away I can hear the faint sound of the footsteps as they walk away Walk away, toward the black again (Is this a dream) I dont know You're drifting away Its been so long Since you've been here by my side Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone Now its a brand new day And i'm thinking once again, you're not so far away And it feels like we're breathing fresh air Till the sky goes black again (Is this a dream) I dont know You're drifting away Its been so long Since you've been here by my side Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone I remember your whisper, hearing it again Then the sky went black again I remember your whisper, hearing it again Then the sky went black again (Crying) I remember the days of old The days of holding your hand Walking along side of you Someday, I hope everything will be fine again You're drifting away Its been so long Since you've been here by my side Still thinking its there, but soon I know You're drifting away Its been so long Since you've been here by my side Still thinking its there, but soon I know, I know its gone Bryan(me)-Your Whisper (Drifting Away) --------- Thats a song I wrote awhile ago while I was going through something that was hard to deal with. And the cool thing about it is, its actually going to be turned into a real song by a band that I am friends with, who are called 'Ruinfate'. Its going to sound like a mix between Linkin Park/Flaw/Staind Please tell me what you think of it
Every song I've seen posted on here have been top class stuff...this one is no exception. I can actually imagine this one going pretty far-so what are you waiting for??? Get off your a**e and make it big! (Ok I'm going over the top there...but seriously, it's a good song...nice one )
thats good. have you written any other songs? If you have post them coz they would be cool to hear as well. That song would rock!
Very nice! You should really write lyrics for an actual band (if you dont already, of course). -The 'Narf
I'm "bumping" this because i'd like 321xero to elaberate on it. I wanna see how many little things he picks out of it that doesnt seem the very best.