Your Whisper (Drifting Away)

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    Bryan

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    You're drifting away
    Its been so long
    Since you've been here by my side
    Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

    I remember hearing your voice, lost again
    Your whisper drawing further away
    I can hear the faint sound of the footsteps as they walk away
    Walk away, toward the black again
    (Is this a dream)
    I dont know

    You're drifting away
    Its been so long
    Since you've been here by my side
    Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

    Now its a brand new day
    And i'm thinking once again, you're not so far away
    And it feels like we're breathing fresh air
    Till the sky goes black again
    (Is this a dream)
    I dont know

    You're drifting away
    Its been so long
    Since you've been here by my side
    Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

    I remember your whisper, hearing it again
    Then the sky went black again
    I remember your whisper, hearing it again
    Then the sky went black again
    (Crying)
    I remember the days of old
    The days of holding your hand
    Walking along side of you
    Someday, I hope everything will be fine again

    You're drifting away
    Its been so long
    Since you've been here by my side
    Still thinking its there, but soon I know
    You're drifting away
    Its been so long
    Since you've been here by my side
    Still thinking its there, but soon I know, I know its gone
    Bryan(me)-Your Whisper (Drifting Away)

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    Thats a song I wrote awhile ago while I was going through something that was hard to deal with.

    And the cool thing about it is, its actually going to be turned into a real song by a band that I am friends with, who are called 'Ruinfate'.
    Its going to sound like a mix between Linkin Park/Flaw/Staind

    Please tell me what you think of it :)
     
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    Rybullet

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    dude, this song rox!!!!! Nice work man.......... :D
     
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    Pinkin Lark

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    i like it alot! very deep lyrics! sweet job! :)
     
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    Bryan

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    Thanks :)
     
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    Will

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    Dude, that's awesome... Those lyrics rock. I can't wait to hear the actual song, hehe.
     
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    Nikki

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    Every song I've seen posted on here have been top class stuff...this one is no exception. I can actually imagine this one going pretty far-so what are you waiting for??? Get off your a**e and make it big!

    (Ok I'm going over the top there...but seriously, it's a good song...nice one :) )
     
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    Amy

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    thats good. have you written any other songs? If you have post them coz they would be cool to hear as well. That song would rock!
     
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    Bryan

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    No one else like it?

    :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(





    :p
     
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    The 'Narf

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    Very nice! You should really write lyrics for an actual band (if you dont already, of course).

    -The 'Narf
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    it's really good. i wanna hear the actual song....
     
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    Remasterbated

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    those lyrics are phat , seriously i agree with everyone , i would love for that to become a song
     
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    Bryan

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    I'm "bumping" this because i'd like 321xero to elaberate on it. I wanna see how many little things he picks out of it that doesnt seem the very best.


    :) :p
     
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    Will

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    LOL. :lol:
     

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