You know hearing your name Makes me go insane I have to be restrained From causing other people pain Never felt this way ever about a single dame And everyone even told me I was goin' the wrong way But being foolish me I still proceeded It was you I needed Just to have you to be with I thought we had a connection I really did I thought without you I couldn't even live But it turns out lifes better without you there Whing like a bitch about how life's unfair I know its unfair I am despair But no you never cared you just sat and combed your black heart hair You never even considered about me at all Even though I would of picked you up if you had falled But you just stood there and thought what a wreck, Am I really going out with that weak peice of shit? Well nice to know my girl truley hates me Well I've been feeling the same things as of lately I need to break away from you Release me from the things you do After all this I was just being used Well in the end whoever choses loses When I lye in bed at night thinkin' 'bout you And all the shit that you put me through All the slutty things that you do Just to fuck whatever dude who you think suits you You said I was yours and you lyed You said us forever but still you lyed It was then that I caught the glimpse in your eye A little devil inside Behind an angel it hides The devil was you when I saw You and my best freind behind the door You half naked and clothes on the floor It just blew my mind my brain could take no more It was at that point i just flipped My mental state was completely switched Into a psycopathic nervous twitch And While you and your boy were secretly scheming I was dreaming Of a way to redime me I needed my self respect back to me I needed to find my sense of inner peace I needed some anger to be realeased Thats why your boy's lucky to be able to walk on his feet Cos I broke those legs as a message DON'T FUCK WITH ME I need to break away from you Release me from the things you do After all this I was just being used Well in the end whoever choses loses And now I've found A Girl so beautiful Its just too unreal Her hair gold Her blue eyes bold Her smile the only thing I wanna see Her laughter the only thing I wanna hear Katie you broke my heart Sarah you stole my heart and I love you I really do But in the end whoever choses loses
I like it, but some parts of it seem a bit loose like switching between line structure a bit in the verses. Apart from that it was really good Keep it up!