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    I'm Not Obsessed!!!
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    Hey everyone, I haven't posted in a while..and I personally think this is horrible, but Derek told me if I didn't post this, he would. Obviously, I don't have a title for it yet, but, yeah..here it goes...



    The anger in your eyes bleeds through your lips
    And poisons me with memories of the day we met

    Your voice won't echo through my head again
    The flowers will be on your grave this time
    Your fingers won't ever fold with mine again
    Your emotions will die, you'll go down with them
    I'll kill every lie, that you have ever spoke
    I will sew up your wounds
    With the love I have choked


    My eyes have grown black and just as cold as your heart
    I won't pull the knife from your throat again
    But I will do my best, to rip you apart
    I promise you this, this promise i'll keep
    Wipe the blood from the knife and then fall to your knees
    Promise me this, this promise please keep
    That you'll never get up, and you'll no longer breathe

    The anger in your eyes bleeds from your wrists
    And poisons me with memories of the day we split...

    Your voice echoes through my head to this day
    The roses have wilted away on my grave
    Pick the petals off one by one
    And cover my body in them
    Cover my skin with wounds from their thorns
    And shove all your lies and hatred in them

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    Its a very beautifully written song, you really need a title for it though, aside from that it's awesome. I can definetely feel the anger.

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    I'm Not Obsessed!!!
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    Haha..Derek, I should have known Anya was in this with you. Haha, and nooo *blush* it is not good

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    Originally posted by Stina@Sep 21 2004, 06:43 PM
    Haha..Derek, I should have known Anya was in this with you. Haha, and nooo *blush* it is not good
    I don't care, you have no idea how much I love this! *humps it*
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    don't stop talking to me; i haven't been listening Alacrity's Avatar
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    That&#39;s really good Stina&#33; Good luck with a title

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    I'm Not Obsessed!!!
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    Haha, woot..Anya humped my song. It was all worth writing in the end Haha..and thank you muchly..I hate picking titles..it&#39;s just as hard as picking band names >.< Well, even though i&#39;m not in a band anymore

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