Lyrics to a new song I'm making... NEED CRITICS

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Money Maker Mike, Apr 10, 2011.

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    Intro

    I'm cleaning the mess of your presence
    Somehow our story doesn't make sense
    On my skin, your touch feels like a dart
    But it hasn't touched my heart

    Verse 1

    I was your drug that you took
    Lacking hope in life, you looked
    innocent and weary, full of sadness
    When my thoughts began to sharpen
    I realised you became another person
    and stealing my bits of happiness

    Chorus 1

    How could it be
    that you meant everything to me?
    I don't need you
    I don't miss you
    How did you make
    me so blinded? You are fake
    I don't need you
    like the way you do

    Verse 2

    You've injected poison in me
    You betrayed me carelessly
    But in your heart you want me back
    I've become harder than bricks
    Your presence makes me sick
    Your mind is narrow, white and black

    Chorus

    Bridge

    And I've taken all your blame
    You kept giving me the shame
    You started the ending
    And I will end it

    Verse 3

    My comfort is what you want
    Your soul has become cheap and instant
    You're begging for me now

    Chorus

    Bridge

    Outro

    I've cleaned up the mess of your presence
    Now that's been cleaned up, it makes sense
     

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