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12-06-2003, 06:13 PM

If I had ever imagined,
It would have come to this.
I would freeze every memory,
I would have saved each kiss.

If had known before,
That this might be the day.
One inwhich the time seems like,
It's left and gone away.

If I had pretended,
That this was all just a dream.
It wouldn't have felt like we were,
Breaking at the seam.

If you hadn't been so stubborn,
And me so scarred and weak.
I wouldn't have to regret,
All the things I had to speak.

If I had a feeling,
That this could start the end.
I could never look at you,
The same way once again.

And now it hurts,
Not to have you by my side.
You're here/ Not next to me,
Why do I always hide?

I wrote this song last night, but it's actually about a situation I had to face in June this past year. As usual, please comment. Thanks ^_^

12-06-2003, 06:16 PM

That's awesome! I remember when that happened, and it's the exact way I felt

12-06-2003, 06:20 PM
Great job. You have gone poem happy now. *gasp*

12-06-2003, 06:25 PM
Lorn: *holds her breath* Poem happy? That's gree-e-at! ;)

Neil: I'm glad my poem did us both some justice :)

Hybrid Soldier
12-06-2003, 06:31 PM
you seem to be getting better at expressing yourself. :) nice poem.

12-06-2003, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by Hybrid Soldier@Dec 6 2003, 01:31 PM
you seem to be getting better at expressing yourself. :) nice poem.
Aaw, thanks for the compliment bud. Somedays I have to express myself in writing or drawing because the biggest mistake I could make would be to keep it bottled. :wth:

12-06-2003, 09:14 PM
Thats really good

12-07-2003, 03:08 PM
Thanks Broken Fist ^_^