Don't Leave Me (One Thing I Know Remix)

[John.]

Here's the first version of Don't Leave Me (One Thing I Know Remix).
It's not that long yet, but It'll be alot longer soon.
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(Chorus)
Your hearing me out (hearing me out)
Screaming it out (screaming it out)
So hear me out, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'm demanding you right now, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'll scream it or shout/
(DON'T LEAVE ME!) I'm calling you out...

I'm evading you with hi-tech stealth/
Still lost in my mind, wishing for wealth/
I'm making you so ill now you better get
some medicine, anything to cure your health/

(Pre-Chorus)
[The pain inside is too strong]
The pain inside is too strong/
Left with the consequence, barely
able to carry-on/
[Theres only one thing I know...]
[Only one thing I know...]
You | are | WRONG!/

It seems like I'm in a place I can't get out of/
It seems like I'm lost without love/
[Theres only one thing I know...]
That I'll rise above/

(Chorus)
Your hearing me out (hearing me out)
Screaming it out (screaming it out)
So hear me out, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'm demanding you right now, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'll scream it or shout/
(DON'T LEAVE ME!) I'm calling you out...

[Dedicated]

Cool. It's great :D

[.ßroken Fist]

thats good

[Dedicated]

Originally posted by .ßroken Fist@May 20 2003, 05:26 PM
thats good
This is one of the good songs that no one replied to :rolleyes:

[.ßroken Fist]

Originally posted by This is dedicated to the kids+May 20 2003, 05:27 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (This is dedicated to the kids @ May 20 2003, 05:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--.ßroken Fist@May 20 2003, 05:26 PM
thats good
This is one of the songs that no one replied to :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
eh?
youve lost me there man

[Dedicated]

Originally posted by .ßroken Fist+May 20 2003, 05:30 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (.ßroken Fist @ May 20 2003, 05:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by -This is dedicated to the kids@May 20 2003, 05:27 PM
<!--QuoteBegin--.ßroken Fist@May 20 2003, 05:26 PM
thats good
This is one of the songs that no one replied to :rolleyes:
eh?
youve lost me there man [/b][/quote]
It&#39;s a good song and no one replied to it :lol:

[John.]

Thanks, I noticed lol, I made the song a little longer, if you wanna see go to my site, but it only the pre-chorus and chorus.
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[Dedicated]

Originally posted by dEfManLP@May 20 2003, 06:55 PM
Thanks, I noticed lol, I made the song a little longer, if you wanna see go to my site, but it only the pre-chorus and chorus.
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I won&#39;t be back until Junish because of problems I&#39;ve been having at home, so this might be my last post for a while.
Ok dude, I&#39;ll check it out ^_^