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Jawknee
05-13-2003, 10:50 PM
So I used to like this girl a lot and she led me on so much. I finally told her I liked her and she said she didn't feel that way and that she liked somebody else. Ouch. Check out the poem I wrote for it.


Verbal Consequence

I walk around and forget what day it is.
I donít really care about none of this.
The only thing that matters is she.
All I want is her to be happy.
Yet why do I want something she doesnít bring me anymore?
ďOnly friendsĒ she proclaims and I feel like friends we are no more.
Itís a different feeling when someone turns you down.
How I have to keep going on like nothing happened, I donít know how.
It seems as if it were so easy for her to say the things she says to me.
She has no idea how much I have to struggle and hide it so she wonít see.
How much I die when I hear her voice in my ears.
Each time I think about her feelings for him, it just brings me tears.
Itís amazing how a few words can affect someoneís life.
Well, just a couple she said to me, and now day-by-day I strive.
Sheís different from the rest, and thatís why I sought to win her heart.
Why did she have lead me on when we were at the park?
I donít want to get my hopes up ever again.
Iím hoping that by tomorrow, my life will end.
Torture is all my heart receives.
In love I shall never again believe.
I used to have hope in miracles but now Iím clueless to whatís going on.
Why does it seem as if all my luck in love goes completely wrong?
Maybe I shouldnít have asked how she felt so I wouldnít be this way.
I could have continued to adore her from afar, but now Iíll cry always.
Slowly, my happiness is slipping like the sand of an hourglass.
Once again, on the road of life, I have had another crash.
She promised things would be the same, but her words are now empty.
We talk and itís not the same, and soon my sorrow will be plenty.
I donít know why I bother or try to find someone I can trust and love.
No one is willing to give me their heart and I watch all my other friends hook up.
When she said she didnít feel the same about me or even close at all,
I felt as if my lungs were compressing tightly and small.
The feeling was so disastrous and my heart began to crumble.
My hope and faith I had in her plopped down and began to tumble.
My dreams, thoughts, and everything I wished for shattered to pieces on the ground.
I really thought I had a chance with her but it all fell apart and I donít know how.

Chrissy
05-14-2003, 12:36 AM
wow, i know that subject way too well :*( i like the poem, i can really relate to it! in fact i probably wrote some with the same kind of subject...especially right after i did exactly what you did.... :(

Jawknee
05-14-2003, 12:37 AM
I never had the strength to give the girl the poem though, just like most of my depressing poems. I shall post more - be on the lookout.

Chrissy
05-14-2003, 12:38 AM
i'll be sure to look for them! and don't worry, i could barely talk to guys i like...let alone give 'em poetry.

Andrea
05-14-2003, 12:43 AM
Wow! :o

Jawknee
05-14-2003, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by FreeFloatingAngel@May 13 2003, 04:38 PM
i'll be sure to look for them! and don't worry, i could barely talk to guys i like...let alone give 'em poetry.
Confidence and self-esteem don't come over-night. Believe me... :unsure: