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John.
05-13-2003, 10:36 PM
I started this song out a few days ago and finished it today, it hasn't been revised, but might be in the future. (One more thing I would just like to wish a Happy Birthday to myself :P )
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Fear mixed with pain/
It seems like theres nothing for me to gain/
The weird thoughts I'm thinking in my brain/
Are they chaotic or insane?/
Am I just another figure lost in this game?/

(Pre-Chorus)
Nothing for me to gain/
Nothing for me to explain/
I'm trying to find myself/
Lost in my mind, wishing for wealth/

(Chorus)
So hear me out, and don't leave me/
I'm telling you now (Don't Leave Me)/
I'll scream it and shout (Don't Leave Me)/
I'm calling you out (Don't Leave Me)/

(Replying Verse)
The pain inside is too strong/
I don't know how long I can carry-on/
But one thing I know is you are wrong/
[And you will always be wrong...]

Sometimes I hear voices/
Sometimes I make bad choices/
But one thing for sure is you are wrong/
[And you will stay wrong]

(Pre-Chorus)
Nothing for me to gain/
Nothing for me to explain/
I'm trying to find myself/
Lost in my mind, wishing for wealth/

(Chorus)
So hear me out, and don't leave me/
I'm telling you now (Don't Leave Me)/
I'll scream it and shout (Don't Leave Me)/
I'm calling you out (Don't Leave Me)/

Cal
05-14-2003, 03:11 PM
i like it :D

Odaton
05-15-2003, 12:58 AM
Great flow, great rhymes and good meaning! Great stuff Neo! 4.5/5

Odaton
05-15-2003, 12:59 AM
Great flow, great rhymes and good meaning! Great stuff DefManLP! 4.5/5

Jawknee
05-15-2003, 01:35 AM
This is really some good stuff here. Good job!!!!

John.
05-15-2003, 02:17 AM
I'm glad you all like my lyrics, it helps me build myself and make better lyricz, but anyway sometime soon I'm gonna release my debut rock album and I was just gonna show a line-up of the tracks and post all the finished versions of the songs on the forums
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here it is:

01. Been Down
02. Some Nobody
03. U=Nothing
04. Step Back
05. Don't Leave Me
06. Who Says
07. Creep
08. Pain
09. Life Story
10. [ Lost ]
11. Who Says (Remix)

Part.Of.Me
05-15-2003, 02:19 AM
Whoa.. That kicks serious ass!

John.
05-15-2003, 10:36 PM
I know lol :P

Odaton
05-16-2003, 08:09 PM
put up some Mp.3s or something, I would really like to hear your stuff!

John.
05-17-2003, 11:56 AM
Unfortunately, all I have is beats right now that I made. I used to rap, I had over like 30 songs recorded, but I need a band to get to the recording stage of these lyrics. >_<

Dedicated
05-17-2003, 02:39 PM
Cool song and good luck with the recording deely ^_^