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05-11-2003, 04:11 PM
Save Me

Rain falls lightly from a tattered sky,
the wind calls out your name.
And I, cold and broken, listen to the call
of a dying heart,and fading love.

My heart bleeds in more ways than one.
Everythings empty,life now is useless.
and I,beneath the cold and heartless moon,wait for the day
when you will make things right.

The barren wasteland I now inhabit,
grows weaker and deadlier by the minute.
And I, torn between the worlds of love and hate, pray
for a hope to arise and rescue my soul.

My fire is fading,I have no will.
The night grows deeper and leaves they stir.
And I, blind in a world of no light,
Trap myself in nothingness,and wait for you.

The world is spinning,but I'm standing still.
Stars twinkle in vain behind dark angry clouds.
And I now stand in the pouring rain,with no one to turn to,
and no where left to run.

I'm dying now,all I feel is pain,
I need someone to save me,lift me up again.
My times running out,I start to suffocate.
Please come back to me,before it's too late.
Save my life,as you once did, touch me again
so I can live.
Save me.

Happy gilmor asked me to write more! this isn't THE BEST thing I've written, but I really couldn't think of too much! (writer block)

Hybrid Soldier
05-11-2003, 04:42 PM
hmmm if this poem rhymed it would be your best work.

.▀roken Fist
05-11-2003, 05:39 PM
Writers blcok totally sucks.. I had it for ages

05-12-2003, 11:23 PM
:o Wow!

Really great job! 4.5/5