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x7r3m3
05-06-2003, 11:24 PM
Here are songs I have posted befor and re-done, tell me what you think, I think there better then before, but most likely can be eaven better

NEVER WALKED AWAY

[Verse]
Looking at me now, they say I have no soul
With my lifeless eyes, I stand up tall
Not going to fall, I stand ready to fightÖ
(And all Iím going to do is give all I got)


If you think Iím going to walk, (youíre wrong)
If you think Iím going to run, (your wrong)
If you think Iím going to hide, (your wrong)

[Chorus]
Another night follows the day
I wander, farther, deep in my soul
Itís all I have leftÖ
(Iíll never change)
Thatís why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
Sometimes I just hate to do it, but I just donít walk awayÖ

[Verse]
I know for a fact, thatís what you want me to do
Just to lay down/act like nothing has happened
(Why donít you understand) itís painted on the wall
I will never fallÖ

[Bridge]
If you think Iím going to look away, (youíre wrong)
If you think Iím going to give up, (your wrong)
If you think Iím going to cry, (your wrong)

[Chorus]
Another night follows the day
I wander, farther, deep in my soul
Itís all I have leftÖ
(Iíll never change)
Thatís why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
I hate to do it, but I just donít walk awayÖ

[Verse]
Itís the same, just as before, never walked away (3x)

[Chorus]
Another night follows the day
I wander, farther, deep in my soul
Itís all I have leftÖ
(Iíll never change)
Thatís why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
I hate to do it, but I just donít walk awayÖ

[b]CONSUMING

[Verse]
Deep in the shadows (you see my face)
Is this the case, to be forsaken
it hurts so much, deep down with in
I hate to say it, I just can't take it

[Chorus]
Iím screaming, feeling the pain
Iím falling, shedding a tear
Iím holding my headÖ
consuming me, taking it allÖ

[Verse]
Is this how it is suppose to be
I remember forgetting it all
when it started attacking me
the time just stood still

[Chorus]
Iím screaming, feeling the pain
Iím falling, shedding a tear
Iím holding my headÖ
consuming me, taking it allÖ

[Verse]
I take it all with in
I fall feeling the pain
I lack what I did before
I hate how I am today
I have nothing leftÖ

I take it all with in
I fall feeling the pain
I lack what I did before
I hate how I am today
I have nothing left!

[Chorus]
Iím screaming, feeling the pain
Iím falling, shedding a tear
Iím holding my headÖ
consuming me, taking it allÖ

Itís Consuming me, from with in (x2)

Itís consuming meÖ

Taste the Ground

[Chorus]
Realizing what I have to do now
Breaking away from this pain
The shame I felt no longer exists
I no longer feel like Iím slain
The memories are floating away

[Verse]
My heart beat, slowly dies down
Itís no longer reflecting on me
There no longer aiming there guns at me
I can get off the ground
No longer wondering whyÖ

[Chorus]
Realizing what I have to do now
Breaking away from this pain
The shame I felt no longer exists
I no longer feel like Iím slain
The memories are floating away

[Verse]
Iím finding my self once again
The sad thoughts I had once with inÖ
there only a memory now
as Iím now longer burned by your lies
No longer wondering whyÖ

[Chorus]
Realizing what I have to do now
Breaking away from this pain
The shame I felt no longer exists
I no longer feel like Iím slain
The memories are floating away

[Verse]
Why should you care/looking through the shattered glass
you stop/in your memory you find/how it all went wrong
I see right through youÖ

[Chorus]
Realizing what I have to do now
Breaking away from this pain
The shame I felt no longer exists
I no longer feel like Iím slain
The memories are floating away

x7r3m3
05-08-2003, 08:10 PM
around 30 views...and no replys lol, c'mon give me some feedback ^^