Consuming

[x7r3m3]

CONSUMING

[Verse]
Now I see
(Looking down at myself)
All I felt, was nothing new
(As I fell to my knees)
Nothing’s helped me up
(Its consuming me)
Life is never the same…

[Chorus]
I don’t know what to do
I try to get up, thinking of you
But you feel so far away…
it’s consuming me leaving nothing behind…
(taking the pain until it’s gone)

[Verse]
I look back at my self
(Not knowing what to do)
I take, faking how I feel
(It’s just as before)
I leave nothing behind
(As I walk away)
Life is never the same…

[Chorus]
I don’t know what to do
I try to get up, thinking of you
But you feel so far away…
it’s consuming me leaving nothing behind…
(taking the pain until it’s gone)

[Verse]
Now I run away…
leaving it all behind...
it took everything just as before…
As it consumed me taking everything I had...

[Chorus]
I don’t know what to do
I try to get up, thinking of you
But you feel so far away…
it’s consuming me leaving nothing behind…
(taking the pain until it’s gone)

Taking the pain until it’s gone…(3x)

[Odaton]

Its pretty good, though its sort of repetitive and the lyrics in brackets interrupt the flow of the song. And 'Taking the pain until its gone' is a lot like SIB 'take all the pain til its gone', so you may want to rethink that line!

Otherwise, good work! ^_^

[x7r3m3]

hmm, yeah your right, im gonna re-do that line moste likely, thanx

[.ßroken Fist]

Yeh it reminds me of SIB with the bracket lines