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x7r3m3
05-03-2003, 01:54 AM
ALL INSIDE

[Verse]
Deep in my soul
it takes it's toul
I don't know how to stop it
but at the end of it all
if im where I am now
I won't escape the pain...

[Chours]
Trying hard to let go
im not sure if I can
I'm feeling a emteyness inside
I'm beginning to loose it all
I was sacerd to see, its all inside

[Verse]
I never told my self the truth
Everywhere I look all I see is the same thing
I'm not sure
if i'm who I use to be
I turned my back, I didnt see
it's not how it use to be...

[Chours]
Trying hard to let go
im not sure if I can
I'm feeling a emteyness inside
I'm beginning to loose it all
I was sacerd to see, its all inside

[Verse]
I try to regain all I had befor..
it seemed like it was deep inside...
You all thought I was safe while...
Holding my head...

[Chours]
Trying hard to let go
im not sure if I can
I'm feeling a emteyness inside
I'm beginning to loose it all
I was sacerd to see, its all inside

X-Clusive
05-03-2003, 02:00 AM
Its ok :rob: :joe:

[Darken Hybrid]
05-03-2003, 02:18 AM
It's pretty good...

x7r3m3
05-03-2003, 03:25 AM
lol thank you,...least im getten reply's :D

Cal
05-03-2003, 07:57 AM
can u spell emptyness?

Chrissy
05-03-2003, 12:44 PM
there are a few too many spelling errors in this. toul = tool, empteyness=emptiness, sacerd=scared, etc. Also loose is not the same thing as lose...loose is something not tight, lose is the opposite of win...that's something a spell checker will probably NOT catch. Next time try downloading a word processor that does spell check, it's easier on us to read; we don't have to try and interpret what you mean. plus it'll make the song look that much better. i give you 8/10 for the idea, 3/10 for your spelling/grammar.

x7r3m3
05-03-2003, 04:19 PM
lol, thx, I was never a good speller... im dl a word processor now :)

Chrissy
05-03-2003, 06:19 PM
okay ^_^ good! i used to STINK at spelling (namely grammar, but spelling as well) and i must say, i can't type so if i didn't have this spell checker word processor...my stuff would be much worse!