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Chrissy
04-27-2003, 07:54 PM
Hurt

A piece of you
A piece of me
Lying here together
In negativity.

Sometimes I wish times would change
So I wouldnít have to feel like Iím stretched across a range.
I feel so numb
You make me feel so dumb.
Why are you here except to criticize me?
Make me feel second to someone who isnít free?
Get yourself a new game
Because this is one girl who isnít lame.

A piece of you
A piece of me
Lying here together
In negativity.

The pain wonít go away
It just refuses to up and leave, always trying to stay.
My scars wonít heal
And I feel
Like a piece of dirt
In the middle of the desert.

A piece of you
A piece of me
Lying here together
In negativity.

Where are you going?
Iím not done with you yet!
Youíve made me hurt,
Now feel the consequences of your regret.

A piece of you
A piece of me
Lying here together
In negativity.

A piece of you
A piece of me
Lying here together
In negativity.

[Darken Hybrid]
04-27-2003, 08:01 PM
wow, it's a very good song.

Chrissy
04-27-2003, 09:36 PM
aww thanks :) i've been writing for ages, but that's the first song i've managed to come up with!

LPro
04-29-2003, 08:23 PM
awsome B) i really like it.you should write more

Chrissy
04-29-2003, 09:16 PM
awww thanks&#33; im trying to come up with a linkin park fanfic...but i doubt ill post it here&#33; i just feel too intimidated with the subject matter and all...plus what if i don&#39;t write one of the guys in correctly >< i don&#39;t need that stress. but i can guarantee you&#39;ll see more poetry/songs from me.

Andrea
04-30-2003, 09:47 PM
I like it&#33;

osctotheedge
04-30-2003, 10:41 PM
great job&#33;