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elie
04-27-2003, 07:13 PM
I got bored so I started again
No matter who I ryhme against I always seem to win
It shouldn't be a match and it shouldn't be game
Ryhming should be a challenge and that should never change

Too bad Elie came in, and destroyed all these rules
Added depth to his ryhme and showed up all these fools
He uses his tounge like a technically advanced tool
Challenges the rest like a Lebanese Ja-Rule

Too bad it only took me a couple minutes to do this ryhme
Imagine what would happen if I sat down and took my time
But ryhming shouldn't be justified, or settled for anything less
The name's Elie and I'm out, I hope you enjoyed this mess



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It's a big EMCEE duel! Man imma woop!

Chrissy
04-27-2003, 07:16 PM
cool freestyle! eh i've come up with rhymes in five minutes as well but it doesn't really come out like yours did. keep up the coolness!

elie
04-27-2003, 07:59 PM
Originally posted by FreeFloatingAngel@Apr 27 2003, 07:16 PM
cool freestyle! eh i've come up with rhymes in five minutes as well but it doesn't really come out like yours did. keep up the coolness!
Thank-you (: