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Dedicated
04-22-2003, 10:18 AM
WORK IN PROGRESS

I'm having a big difficulty,
I can't seem to smile,
Nothing makes me happy,
I'm sorry this might take a while.
What is the point?
Why can't I see?
Why does nothing seem to,
Seem to matter to me?

I'm not a work in progress,
I'm completely done,
Why can't I get together?
Why can't I have some fun?

Will anybody help me?
'Cause no one seems to care,
And no one seems to give one,
But I'm having a nightmare,
Pictures worth a thousand words,
But yours is worth more,
So Why can't I stand up?
And get up off the floor?

I'm not a work in progress,
I'm completely done,
Why can't I get together?
Why can't I have some fun?

I'm still not happy,
I'm still very sad,
Why can't I get better?
And remember what we had?
Now you've packed your bags up,
You're going away,
Promise me you'll come back,
Come back someday.

'Cause I'm not a work in progress,
I'm completely done,
I''m gonna get together,
And go and have some fun.
'Cause I'm not a work in progress,
I'm completely done,
I'm gonna get off this floor,
And go and have some fun.


so...... tell me what you think. ^_^

Aaron
04-22-2003, 10:25 AM
this is my first reply, it sounds cool, but it actually sounds more like a poem, it is used for rap i no, but i think it sounds like a poem, its just my opinion