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Will
04-20-2003, 12:06 PM
Cavern of Darkness

Hearing the screaming of thousands of dying souls
Prepare for a journey through a dark world untold
Swirling, poisonous clouds spread across the sky
Threatening the oppressive sun with eternal night
While on a more dimly lit, foggy terrain below you
The landscape melts and dissolves, remains true
Milky, indefinable mutations creep across the land
Satan himself is there to take you by the hand
Through this cavern of darkness we shall travel
Evil that should never be told will soon unravel
Throwing itself upon the mercy of the darkness
White defeated by black and all who oppose this
Demonic screams can be heard from all around
Churning and burning from deep underground
Feeling the betrayal and hate laid upon them all
Dark ambience surrounds it to make them fall
The darkness awaiting you on the other side
Is enough to make all that is good run and hide
The evil breathed here will bring all to an end
And to the shadows of pain all will be sent
Feeding and breeding on all that is good
Stealthy assailants rip through neighborhoods
To the darkness all those who oppose evil go
Down the river Styx is where they shall flow
To the fiery pits of Satanic, demonic laughter
Hypnotic shrill screams turn them against her
Burning with the rest of those who oppose him
The Dark Lord is here, hes whos been chosen
The journey through the dark cavern comes to end
All that was good is gone there are no friends
White defeated by black and all that oppose this
Good throws itself upon the mercy of darkness

Nikki
04-20-2003, 03:53 PM
:mellow:


:unsure:


(w00t)


Bloody hell Will. Where do you get the inspiration for this stuff?! I swear...you scare me sometimes with the stuff you come out with.

Top class work mate. Top class. ;)

Hybrid Soldier
04-20-2003, 05:03 PM
this goes really good with the beat of frgt10. anyways it was great.

Derek
04-20-2003, 05:57 PM
I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

Keep writin brotha, me likes yo' shiznat.

Cal
04-20-2003, 11:45 PM
^_^ <-- speachless

OggeM
04-21-2003, 01:38 PM
cool ^_^

Andrea
04-22-2003, 02:50 AM
WOW&#33; :o I love it&#33;

From The Inside
04-22-2003, 07:51 AM
Originally posted by Derek@Apr 20 2003, 09:57 AM
I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

Keep writin brotha, me likes yo&#39; shiznat.
Gothic? Not for me.

Will, that was moving. The River Styx was a nice touch, man. I easily placed myself walking into and to the end of this cavern. :)

Edit:
I love how you use so much detail from describing the sky, to approaching the cavern, and then inside the cavern. Your adjectives are super-cool&#33;

arT saveS
04-25-2003, 02:12 AM
Originally posted by Derek@Apr 20 2003, 12:57 PM
I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

Keep writin brotha, me likes yo&#39; shiznat.
"..me likes yo shiznat"... :mellow: ^_^ :D :lol: (w00t)

That was funny..

:whistle: :shifty:

X-Clusive
04-26-2003, 01:24 AM
This is hot&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

p.s people plz read "questions to ask n&#39;tensefied" in writers cove plz

N'tensified
04-29-2003, 02:27 AM
Keep up the great talent Will. :)

crazy_dips:-)
10-22-2003, 10:20 AM
That was amazing&#33;&#33; It was scary but amazing..Like everyone around here seems to say, yes, you are extremely talented ^_^