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N'tensified
04-19-2003, 02:52 AM
Falling to the ground slowly,
reaching for myself's life again.
Reaching to the inside coldly,
I'd see my self rise up and then.

[.Bridge.]
I'd look to see If I was there,
when I knew I couldn't hide.
I'd see the clock ticking,
counting down the time.

[.Chorus.]
I'd see the pain through agony,
not so very far.
I'd keep all my memories,
all about this war.
When I knew you wouldn't be there,
I would have no shoulder.
When I remembered all these memories,
About being a soldier.

When I grasp my weapon coldy,
All I think about is to defend.
I can see my fate unfolding.
My destiny would crash and then.

[.Bridge.]
I'd look to see If I was there,
when I knew I couldn't hide.
I'd see the clock ticking,
counting down the time.

[.Chorus.]
I'd see the pain through agony,
not so very far.
I'd keep all my memories,
all about this war.
When I knew you wouldn't be there,
I would have no shoulder.
When I remembered all these memories,
About being a soldier.

That's it, your done.
I'm through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

[And then....]

[.Bridge.]
I'd look to see If I was there,
when I knew I couldn't hide.
I'd see the clock ticking,
counting down the time.

[.Chorus.]
I'd see the pain through agony,
not so very far.
I'd keep all my memories,
all about this war.
When I knew you wouldn't be there,
I would have no shoulder.
When I remembered all these memories,
About being a soldier.
[No.]
I'd see the pain through agony,
not so very far.
I'd keep all my memories,
all about this war.
When I knew you wouldn't be there,
I would have no shoulder.
When I remembered all these memories,
About being a soldier.
[No.]
N'tensified
04-19-2003, 07:38 PM
Please someone post a comment, concern, or suggestion. :(
Cal
04-19-2003, 11:10 PM
i would love to see u do something with that song

put music onto it ;)
N'tensified
04-20-2003, 12:31 AM
Thanks. I'll try.
Hybrid Soldier
04-20-2003, 01:06 AM
That's it, your done.
I'm through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.



sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
Shinji
04-20-2003, 10:27 AM
i like the whole song
Cal
04-20-2003, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by Hybrid Soldier@Apr 20 2003, 01:06 AM
That's it, your done.
I'm through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
I'm getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I've lost my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.



sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
That's it, im done
I'm through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I'm getting slower,
my heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
I'm getting slower,
my Heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

i thought i would be ur producer ^_^
N'tensified
04-20-2003, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by ViSuAL+Apr 20 2003, 10:30 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ViSuAL @ Apr 20 2003, 10:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Hybrid Soldier@Apr 20 2003, 01:06 AM
That&#39;s it, your done.
I&#39;m through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.



sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
That&#39;s it, im done
I&#39;m through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I&#39;m getting slower,
my heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.
I&#39;m getting slower,
my Heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.

i thought i would be ur producer ^_^ [/b][/quote]
Two different opinions at once. I would agree with both sides I guess, I&#39;m just Seeing your opinions. Oh well, thanks for replying....again. :chemist:
X-Clusive
04-23-2003, 11:26 PM
What is this about a journal or what? :joe:
Hybrid Soldier
04-23-2003, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by ViSuAL+Apr 20 2003, 05:30 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ViSuAL @ Apr 20 2003, 05:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Hybrid Soldier@Apr 20 2003, 01:06 AM
That&#39;s it, your done.
I&#39;m through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.



sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
That&#39;s it, im done
I&#39;m through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I&#39;m getting slower,
my heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.
I&#39;m getting slower,
my Heart feels colder.
trailing by my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.

i thought i would be ur producer ^_^ [/b][/quote]
wow that sounds much better.
X-Clusive
04-25-2003, 01:31 AM
Yo N&#39;tensefied why not making a song against me you scared. People Please look at my new song "Questions to ask N&#39;tensefied?" and u see wat i mean :joe:
arT saveS
04-25-2003, 01:52 AM
Originally posted by Hybrid Soldier@Apr 19 2003, 08:06 PM
That&#39;s it, your done.
I&#39;m through with you.
I cannot lie,
about my find.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.
I&#39;m getting slower,
Heart feels colder.
I&#39;ve lost my shoulder,
I&#39;M JUST A SOLDIER.



sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
I see forced rhyming..
But not bad at all. :D
arT saveS
04-25-2003, 01:57 AM
Originally posted by X-Clusive@Apr 24 2003, 08:31 PM
Yo N&#39;tensefied why not making a song against me you scared. People Please look at my new song "Questions to ask N&#39;tensefied?" and u see wat i mean :joe:
Oh, and "yo", I think you need to lay of N`tensified..
And to answer your question for him..
He&#39;s mature..
N'tensified
04-26-2003, 02:31 AM
Someone stood up for me.... :( I am so very happy&#33; :) ..... :chemist:
X-Clusive
04-26-2003, 02:36 AM
F*ck yalls i feel like killin yalls cuz yall got no IDEA&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;1
N'tensified
04-26-2003, 02:39 AM
Shut up you Rapper-wannabe. :angry:
arT saveS
04-28-2003, 01:54 AM
Originally posted by N&#39;tensified@Apr 25 2003, 09:31 PM
Someone stood up for me.... :( I am so very happy&#33; :) ..... :chemist:
^_^ :P