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Seinfeld
11-06-2008, 10:16 PM
Stifle you, oh king of the lost
Hoping for amendments; Summon a creature called "artist"
To heal the damage done,
the plague on this house; Beware, here comes the arsonist

Oh, Medusa, inside your lair,
would you promise me my safe return?
Would you keep me; beyond the Chimera's grasp,
if I offered you my fur?

Sadly,
I have no posession, other than my scalp
to offer, should you turn this offer down
for I know, you fable, could care less for me,
or I could not have wound up in a story so profound

minuteforce
11-06-2008, 11:01 PM
Sadly,
I have no posession, other than my scalp
to offer, should you turn this offer down
for I know, you fable, could care less for me,
or I could not have wound up in a story so profound:lol: Oh, that's good.

Seinfeld
11-07-2008, 12:43 PM
:lol: Oh, that's good.

I sense sarcasm...

minuteforce
11-08-2008, 05:53 AM
I thought it was good. :) The ending, I found anti-climatic, which is what I liked about it.