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Odaton
04-12-2003, 03:59 AM
(Slow Tempo)

Can I break away from this?
This constant feeling of helplessness...
The pain inside, I cannot hide
And I am so depressed, of

(Faster)
CHORUS
Constant accusations
And no sense of compassion
I see no reaction
When I tell you my frustrations...
I can only take so much

(Fast)
(Why do I try to put my faith in you
All I see then is the mistakes you do
All I wanna do is to start erasing you
From my life, when you take what I make
You break it, and then I lose all my faith in you
Now the agony is draggin me downwards
Becoming so weak I'm branded a coward
All you want to do is increase your power
You pressure me back and make me cower
You ask me to let me trust your promises
But you've broken them within an hour
With no real premises for error.

Sometimes to me your a nightmare, a figure of terror
Other times to me you are still irresistible
Sometimes I think I'm being insensitive)

But whenever I try to trust you to
Listen to me and my feelings you,
Break your promise like you always do,
No matter what I say, I always lose...

CHORUS

(Oh yeah and the nagging accusations
With your sarcasm, increasing my frustrations
Reliant on degredation to get your way
Supplied with bribes just to get my say
Blackmails and agruments are in your array
Weapons of words are destructive by day
And at night, it doesn't stop there,
I get constantly confronted every moment we share
So c'mon try to get more aware,
And maybe if they dangerous diction wasn't there
Life for me would be a lot more fair)

Odaton
04-14-2003, 10:32 PM
Any criticism or praise? :)

ISnortMyPixieDust
05-02-2003, 05:45 PM
boy do I know how that feels...
Love it. Cool and greatly written. I can feel the beat.

chazy_chaz_fan
05-02-2003, 05:47 PM
Thats kinda deep....I like it! Really good!...thanx 4 reviewing mine!