Crash The System

[Cal]

Hey guys im new here, but im starting a band and ive wrote a few songs so im gonna share em with ya - heres one i like the most :D

[Verse 1]
shootin up women within the vicinity
fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity
take a slash with a coco-cola bottle
slammin the breaks while your goin full throttle

[Chorus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

my mind is crushed its taking some beatings
i dont know why but i seem to take them
but i think im gonna leave it - take a long draw
im going to move on - leave my mind to thaw

[Chourus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

[Bridge]
Crash the system - burn me down
One step closer - round and round
my mind is high - above the clouds
im gonna leave your hearts all laying in shrouds

[Chorus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

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as you can see im not great..... but im only starting :P

[arT saveS]

Originally posted by ViSuAL@Apr 9 2003, 07:32 AM
Hey guys im new here, but im starting a band and ive wrote a few songs so im gonna share em with ya - heres one i like the most :D

[Verse 1]
shootin up women within the vicinity
fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity
take a slash with a coco-cola bottle
slammin the breaks while your goin full throttle

[Chorus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

my mind is crushed its taking some beatings
i dont know why but i seem to take them
but i think im gonna leave it - take a long draw
im going to move on - leave my mind to thaw

[Chourus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

[Bridge]
Crash the system - burn me down
One step closer - round and round
my mind is high - above the clouds
im gonna leave your hearts all laying in shrouds

[Chorus]
all you walk around like you think you are the betters
now all my songs sound like suicide letters
burn me down - crash the system
when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

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as you can see im not great..... but im only starting :P
Sorry I took a song from a while back but...

Ok well it's not terrible but you have obivous plagerism....

"Fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity" Is definately taken from crazy town..

Also..

"Now all my songs sound like suicide letters" Is definately also taken from them...

And the line above what I last typed and that line don't make sense.