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Derek
04-08-2003, 02:28 AM
[Verse 1]
You never listened to me when I wanted you to,
And now that we are through,
All I can ask now is just exactly what can I do?
Was I ever something to you?
Because you were never something to me
We never will be, a part of this game,
Or one of the same,
I know I'm sick of all the rotten things that you said,
So lets go our seperate ways, for this is ending today,
I'm having my way, and that is out of your life,
Or finding you lying underneath me on the edge of a knife

[Chorus]
You need to give my space,
And stop getting up in my face!
Before I get another reason to take you out of this place,
You need to give my space,
And get right off of my case,
Before I'm forced to commit an action based on the anger i've faced,
You need to give my space,
And stop being a waste,
Before I'm forced to make your head feel like it is slightly misplaced!

[Verse 2]
AND YOU!
Never thought of the impact of the words you say,
While I was left here listenin to you runnin your mouth almost every single day,
The same old bullshit just phrased in a slightly different way,
While I attempted to keep these evil thoughts inside of me contained inside and held at bay,
A chance to escape from your insanity is all I was left to pray,
As my vision faded red and my world turned into a dark shade of gray,
All I knew was, that you weren't meant to stay,
As I gave into the smothering darkness inside of me

[Chorus]
You need to give my space,
And stop getting up in my face!
Before I get another reason to take you out of this place,
You need to give my space,
And get right off of my case,
Before I'm forced to commit an action based on the anger i've faced,
You need to give my space,
And stop being a waste,
Before I'm forced to make your head feel like it is slightly misplaced


I tried to warn you before it took over me,
But you were just to blind and too stuck up for you to ever see,
What was going to go your way, as your skin had started to bleed,
I had finally took your life, I had committed my deed.

You never gave me my space,
(You never got out of my face!)
You gave me just another reason to take you out of this place,
You never gave me my space,
You never got off of my case,
And made me feel forced to commit an action based on the anger i've faced,
You never gave my space,
To me you were only a waste,
As I put you in a noose and made your neck feel like it was slightly misplaced!

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[b]Information:Originally intended to be a breakup song I noticed how the first chorus seemed very violent and decided I would attempt to make a Distrurbed/Slipknot-ish song for once.

Omar
04-08-2003, 02:35 AM
the only line thats pure crap is the stab blood one...it comes off too blatant, make an inference instead :D

otherwise, i like it alot, just needs some rewording in the chorus and a little bit better progression in the verses ^_^

Cal
04-09-2003, 04:10 PM
ya i agree, u layed it down son! but that blood thing stands out too much, anyway, check out my songs and tell me what u think!