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[Darken Hybrid]
04-05-2003, 11:36 PM
do you guys remember my first rhyme. I upgraded it. I think you've seen it as my sig a couple of days ago.

yea, back for the first time
tryin' to make this rhyme
one of the greatest of all times
introducing some pride
not to make you cry
not to make you blind
but to realize that you've been livin' a lie
release your inner side and be alive
it's like taking a long ass drive
without anything to survive,
but it doesn't matter, you just gotta try
I'm here to make you realize,
to be happy and don't wave good bye
'cause this ain't over until you purify

Pinkin Lark
04-05-2003, 11:44 PM
eh its arite

Kęton
04-06-2003, 10:23 AM
lol, That's so weird.

I wrote something like that awhile back :chemist:.

arT saveS
04-07-2003, 02:00 AM
Eh..well..it really doesn't make any sense dude...

Will
04-07-2003, 09:55 AM
Originally posted by xXxCrawlingxXx@Apr 6 2003, 09:00 PM
Eh..well..it really doesn't make any sense dude...
Cool, someone said it for me.

Neil
04-07-2003, 01:45 PM
Speaking of which, Will can you pm me your rap. It was awesome. And if you have a mic, you can do the vocals for me and I could put it to a music track for you :D

[Darken Hybrid]
04-07-2003, 09:59 PM
what doesn't make sense? how can't you tell the meaning of this rap rhyme? c'mon.