Watching (plz read and respond)

[Shattered PrideSickofbeingdenied]

Watching

Watching From
A distance
Searching For the answers
To questions that haven’t
Been asked

Sitting In The hell
Into which, into which,
I fell (continued)
Shrinking from
My Fears
Hiding, I’m Hiding (continued)
From My peers (continued)
Covering up my
Ears,
Trying, trying,
Not to hear
Their sneers (continued)

I can no longer stand on my own
Theses crutches are
A loan

My home, O my home,
Has burned to the ground

My life, My life (continued)
Is nowhere to be found (continued)


I am a puppy you
You are a hound

Always, always
Chasing me DOWN (continued)

~*End*~
J.K.

[erasethepain]

Your name reminds me of a song I wrote.

It's good so far but make it longer.

[Pinkin Lark]

its not bad

[Hybrid Xero]

It's Good. You would want to try to make it longer, but it's good.

[Shattered PrideSickofbeingdenied]

aight yea i'll try making it longer and re post it when im done thnx for the feed back