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Akidfrompa
01-24-2007, 11:12 PM
Two sets of footsteps are becoming distant
She can't hear his cries in the pouring rain

He's out of sight and she's in anothers arms
She's out of sight and he has no where to go

Each piece of time; like before; like me
Doesn't matter without you.

I don't want this, but your silence digs a wound
Greater than your any words have ever said

I screamed my lungs out trying to reach you
But you only hear his whispers

Each piece of time; like before; like me
Doesn't matter without you.
Each piece of time; like before
Is worth the nothing that I am

esaul17
02-12-2007, 06:14 PM
Wow. I read this before and meant to comment, but forgot.

I love your writing. This is great.

"I screamed my lungs out trying to reach you
But you only hear his whispers"

I love that part.