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Hybrid Soldier
03-25-2003, 12:15 AM
My poem...

Fourteen Years of Pursuit

I have sought but never found
The answers for I've waited
Each test I'm being thrown at
Are the ones that I've hated

My innocence leaps at every breath
As thoughts take terrible turns
Confusion starts to lurk inside me
As if something that I yearn

Anger builds while fear surpasses
Opportunities come to forgive mistakes
People seek but don't realize
The chances that I take

Honesty smiles when I stop
The pursuit has finally caught up
The red blood has died down
I have found it

Rhinoj87
03-26-2003, 09:15 PM
pretty good in my opinion

Hybrid Soldier
03-27-2003, 04:35 AM
thanks. :)

Rhinoj87
03-27-2003, 12:28 PM
Originally posted by Hybrid Soldier@Mar 27 2003, 04:35 AM
thanks. :)
your welcome