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x7r3m3
03-22-2003, 06:41 PM
May or may not know, I write songs ( also poetry and stuff like that ) well I just finished one tell me what ya think, some may like some may not, I just want your opinion, oh and the tune of it is, like a LP - Figure.09 sound if you have heard it

So Tired:

[Verse 1]
Lying here, nothing to do
(I'm almost gone)
Closing my eye, death apporching fast
(Just runnen out of time)
You, siten there, nothings the same
I am just so....tired

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...

[Verse 2]
Day after day, all the same
like you just dont care, what is my life
can i just break away, take the pain
live your life, just walk away
I'm just so....tired

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...

[Verse 3]
This is happen, I'm still not healed
just leave me hear, leave me hear
my face is swety im out of time, but
I dont want you to be the one
I just realize, its not all right, im just tired...

so tired... (2x)

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...

ProJecT NotHinG
03-23-2003, 11:44 PM
Originally posted by x7r3m3@Mar 22 2003, 07:41 PM
May or may not know, I write songs ( also poetry and stuff like that ) well I just finished one tell me what ya think, some may like some may not, I just want your opinion, oh and the tune of it is, like a LP - Figure.09 sound if you have heard it

So Tired:

[Verse 1]
Lying here, nothing to do
(I'm almost gone)
Closing my eye, death apporching fast
(Just runnen out of time)
You, siten there, nothings the same
I am just so....tired

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...

[Verse 2]
Day after day, all the same
like you just dont care, what is my life
can i just break away, take the pain
live your life, just walk away
I'm just so....tired

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...

[Verse 3]
This is happen, I'm still not healed
just leave me hear, leave me hear
my face is swety im out of time, but
I dont want you to be the one
I just realize, its not all right, im just tired...

so tired... (2x)

[Chours]
I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
just leave me hear, go away
turn your head, walk away
im almost gone...
nice, i haven't heard Figure.09 yet, so i don't know what it'll sound like.