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Reanimated Spirit
03-22-2003, 12:50 AM
I'm currently writing an album, the tentative title is "Diary of a Dying Soldier" so without further ado, here's the first song...

Karma

[Fast Rap]

Don't worry,
I'm okay
I'm alright.
Just broken inside,
but I'm fine,
just fine.
Now,
lets' see you get through this ####,
all the crap you put me through.
Because you're a CRIMINAL,
stealing my heart,
stealing my soul,
and running away.
Because you're a CRIMINAL.

[Slow, Soft Chorus]

I can't believe that you plead innocent,
to a crime you blatantly commited,
but don't worry,
I won't shoot you,
I won't harm you.
I'll let fate play it's part through the day,
time go by and when the cycle ends,
it'll all come back to you,
that's what we call Karma.
So just don't worry.

[Fast Rap]

Don't turn your back on me!
The jury's watching,
analyzing your every ####### move,
HAHA! I am the judge and hury,
and the verdict is clear;
guilty as charged!
Maybe I'm paranoid,
or maybe I just know something you don't.
The facts are here, lay out before you.
But you still deny it!
Now hon' I don't like violence,
and I don't want violence.
But look right here,
this blade on my wrist,
now this is a knife,
this will kill.
Looky Looky,
well I've gone a bit crazy it seems,
but this life just isn't working out for me,
this Karma thing just ain't going my way.

[Chorus x3]

[Whisper]

Karma, you do something bad, it's gonna hit you back...

Birger
03-22-2003, 11:40 AM
This is really awesome! :o :D

arT saveS
03-23-2003, 05:16 AM
I don't like it.

1.) Seems like you stole "Because your a CRIMINAL" from Eminem's "Criminal."

2.)Seems like you stole "Dont turn you back on me" from LP's "Faint"

3. I just don't like it..

Reanimated Spirit
03-23-2003, 07:38 AM
Originally posted by xXxCrawlingxXx@Mar 23 2003, 05:16 AM
I don't like it.

1.) Seems like you stole "Because your a CRIMINAL" from Eminem's "Criminal."

2.)Seems like you stole "Dont turn you back on me" from LP's "Faint"

3. I just don't like it..
I don't listen to Eminem =\ and I didn't steal anything off Linkin Park, obviously their style influenced the type of music it is, but it isn't stolen.

Andrea
03-23-2003, 02:10 PM
I like it! :)

.▀roken Fist
03-23-2003, 06:20 PM
In the words of LP..

Thats pretty dope

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