View Full Version : Song/Poem thing..

03-16-2003, 03:47 AM
Heart ache, Heart Break
Somehow it did not last
Painful memories of a future,
No longer join with the past.
All the things I've shared with you-
Were just in passing? Never true?
I want and hope what can not be
To know your heart, What I cannot see.
Is this the feeling, what it is to care
When all I feel is just despair?
To give up this dream, again I try,
But always hoping, asking why.
I feel rejection, feel such pain;
All I want is to try again
But not if this is not true Love,
And in His plan that's written above.
Give Him my hurting, my pain inside,
The broken part, the part that's died.
So confused, I don't understand,
I miss the feeling- holding your hand.
Close my eyes and I feel scared,
For all the caring, the time we've shared;
To face a future, it all seems vain
That I may have to go through this again.
An emptiness is in my heart,
Lonliness is such a part.
Put it behind, look ahead,
But all I see is your face instead.

What you think?

03-16-2003, 05:12 PM
Youv'e got nice writing skills. :D

Really liked your Poem/Song.