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Bryan
03-13-2003, 10:11 PM
This is a very serious poem I wrote about a tuff time in my life...

Rose's are red, violets are blue
He is stupid, and so are you!

Any feedback? :lol:
Willstar
03-13-2003, 10:38 PM
Wow, dude, those lyrics are deep. I hope you pull out of this one...
Bryan
03-13-2003, 11:03 PM
Originally posted by Akuma@Mar 13 2003, 06:38 PM
Wow, dude, those lyrics are deep. I hope you pull out of this one...
I'm hoping :(


:P
Hybrid Soldier
03-13-2003, 11:05 PM
that touched my heart. :wub:
:lol:
sup103
03-13-2003, 11:40 PM
Amazing. 13 out of 10.
Bryan
03-14-2003, 12:55 AM
Thank you everyone, thank you ^_^
Willstar
03-14-2003, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by sup103@Mar 13 2003, 06:40 PM
Amazing. 13 out of 10.
LMFAO. :lol: :lol:

This was better than my reply.. lol.
erasethepain
03-14-2003, 02:08 AM
it sucks!
Bryan
03-14-2003, 02:44 AM
Originally posted by J Money@Mar 13 2003, 10:08 PM
it sucks!
All feedback is welcome.

But come on, you must be joking, those words are almost as good as LP's! :lol:
sup103
03-14-2003, 02:53 AM
*as a Kerrang reporter*

The lyrics of Chester 76 are whiney nu-metal, AKA 13 year old flaming words. But we here at Kerrang! give it KKKKK, for effort. Did I mention, thr greatest band in the world is 98 Degrees? Thats real music, forget deep lyrics, we need songs about that girl who dumped that guy and now they need to make an entire CD on it. Brillance.

I feel better now. :huh: Kidding Chester :lol:
[Darken Hybrid]
03-14-2003, 03:01 AM
Originally posted by Chester 76@Mar 13 2003, 10:11 PM
This is a very serious poem I wrote about a tuff time in my life...

Rose's are red, violets are blue
He is stupid, and so are you!

Any feedback? :lol:
u gotta be kidding me...
Amy
03-14-2003, 05:31 AM
:o that is very very very serious. i think it could just be the best poem i have ever read it my life! you are a real great writer.. do some more

:lol:
Shinji
03-15-2003, 11:36 PM
yep very serious :blink:
bLu3DeViL314
03-16-2003, 02:33 AM
I'm feelin the VIBE man... the atmosphere is crazy... i dig your words man... dude.. roses....
Bryan
03-16-2003, 04:11 AM
I'm working on another one now, expect it soon :chemist: :chemist:











:P
Remasterbated
03-16-2003, 04:43 AM
man , that poem really touches me , the lyrics are deep , it makes me wanna make a poem like that
Birger
03-16-2003, 05:19 PM
Sereiously dude, I'm freaking crying over that one.. :'(

:shifty:
forgotten friday
03-21-2003, 03:02 AM
OMG ya know I couldn't write something like that if I tried :lol:
Boarder7987
03-21-2003, 03:29 AM
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-Nice try, think Staff doesnt look everywhere? Dont expect to be back tomorrow, your banned.