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MaDd BoKo 03
03-08-2003, 10:17 PM
I can't take it
I shut my eyes and can't get you out
And all i do is fake ####
I'm so consumed with doubt
When your the only thing I think about
Wish I could have just once chance
or maybe one slow dance
I know i'm not the coolest kid
Don't know what I did
I lay down at night
and Have a fight
With my feelings
I'm consumed with all the real things
When you leave my world ends
And I know my heart will mend
If I can't be with you I should be dead
Why can't I ge threw this?
Everything I say to you seems so bliss
Just tell me whats wrong with me
I could never change for you
So love me for me
BUt I'm still falling into you

321xero
03-11-2003, 07:53 AM
"Everything I say to you seems so bliss"

i must ask, "HUH?!"

don't use a thesaurus to replace words because as you can see, it didn't work out.

even if you used the right wording, BLISSFUL, it wouldn't really make sense.

Everything you say to this person is heavenly?

"I know i'm not the coolest kid"

didn't you say this in another song?

"Just tell me whats wrong with me
I could never change for you"

you want this person to tell you what's wrong with you, but yet you're not gonna change and you want them to accept you for you, right? so why bother asking them to tell you what's wrong with you? it contradicts.

put more effort and re-read this stuff.
songs don't take 10 seconds to write


or do they? :blink:

MaDd BoKo 03
03-11-2003, 11:18 AM
you want this person to tell you what's wrong with you, but yet you're not gonna change and you want them to accept you for you, right? so why bother asking them to tell you what's wrong with you? it contradicts.

I wanna know whats wrong with me so i can let her know about the real me