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erasethepain
03-08-2003, 03:20 AM
This song pretty much explains itself. This is meant to be a hard song but mellow. It's kinda short, though.

Everything I do, seems to bother you,
If I'm not what you want me to be,
Then why don't you just kill me?
You just assume,
That whatever I say, isn't good enough for you,
We might as well not even speak,
Your always worried about what other people think,
You've made me lose all of my desire,
Because all I am to you is just a failure

I hate the way you whisper my name,
If your so ashamed, then why dont you tell me how I can change?
I just want you to accept me

I can barely think and my bodies numb,
Still trying to get my point across, Look at what we've become,
We act like children, I just want you to know where I'm comin from,
I want you to listen,
Instead of seeing me as a discrace,
Because no matter what I do, I cant change my face,
You make me feel like ####,
Listen to me, look into my eyes,
You've taken away all of my pride,
Every word is still stuck in my head,
Dwelling over the words I should have said

I hate the way you whisper my name,
If your so ashamed, then why dont you tell me how I can change?
I just want you to accept me

Don't deny it, don't deny it, don't ######' deny it....

I've lost all confidence in myself,
I'm giving in to the pressure to try and be someone else...

Oblivion
03-08-2003, 03:34 AM
Thats great, well done.

arT saveS
03-08-2003, 04:36 AM
It's not bad, but why all the cussing? I mean we all cuss, but why put it in the music? It doesn't help any, it wastes room...I like it, but when your writing a song cussing shouldn't come too, just feelings.

erasethepain
03-08-2003, 04:41 AM
Why shouldnt I not be able to cuss? Its what I feel.

Oblivion
03-08-2003, 04:42 AM
He could go all Limp Bizkit like and say 48 ####'s in one song.......