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arT saveS
03-07-2003, 10:28 PM
This is a new song from my band.

Push And Shove

.::Verse 1::.
Anger from the inside
Its killing me, it makes me die
I can't seem to escape its grasp
You get me, you take away my last breath

.::Chorus::.
You push me
You shove me
(You throw me to the ground)
You push me
You shove me
(You hurt me till there's no sound)

.::Verse 2::.
Powerless I fall to the floor
Blood pours out of my open wound
My body, my soul, I feel like I can sore
Dead is what I will be soon

.::Chorus::.

.::Bridge::.
(Scream-sang)
Push away the feelings I hide
Fear removed from whom I despise
Shove the violence back at you
The suffering, your pain, it's time is due

[Darken Hybrid]
03-07-2003, 10:36 PM
can u record the song and put it up? since u are a band. i would like to hear it.

arT saveS
03-07-2003, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Linkin Master@Mar 7 2003, 06:36 PM
can u record the song and put it up? since u are a band. i would like to hear it.
We haven't recoreded it yet, me and the vocalist just got done writing that.
I will try to get that one on here, but since we haven't even played it yet it might be a bit hard. :P

Oblivion
03-07-2003, 10:47 PM
I would like to hear them, and the verses are good just the chours could be longer.....

arT saveS
03-07-2003, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by Oblivion@Mar 7 2003, 06:47 PM
I would like to hear them, and the verses are good just the chours could be longer.....
Well the reason they aren't long is because...

1.) We are planning on making this a slow song. It's going to be medium hard...the riffs aren't going to be anything LP has put out from Meteora..but the usual punk riff...

2.) I am just coming out of writers block, and didn't have a bunch of input..I have the bridge, and the chorus. That's my work. But the verses is all him.

3.) A lot of songs I have wrote have longer verses, because they are played faster, but we thought a mid-tempo, slow song would be a nice change.

erasethepain
03-08-2003, 02:08 AM
I see what you mean, Crawling.

I'm writting a song with the chorus:


#### it, Your not even listenning
Shut up, I'm sick of your bitching
Why, Cant you just accept me?

I can do way better than that but, it fits the song. I'll still prolly change it though.

Oblivion
03-08-2003, 02:21 AM
This may be stupid but whats a bridge?

Will
03-08-2003, 02:30 AM
It's a part in the song that brings the first half and the end of the song together.. like the "I put my trust in you" part in In The End.

Oblivion
03-08-2003, 02:32 AM
Oh ok lol thanks.