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Bryan
03-02-2003, 06:17 AM
You're drifting away
Its been so long
Since you've been here by my side
Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

I remember hearing your voice, lost again
Your whisper drawing further away
I can hear the faint sound of the footsteps as they walk away
Walk away, toward the black again
(Is this a dream)
I dont know

You're drifting away
Its been so long
Since you've been here by my side
Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

Now its a brand new day
And i'm thinking once again, you're not so far away
And it feels like we're breathing fresh air
Till the sky goes black again
(Is this a dream)
I dont know

You're drifting away
Its been so long
Since you've been here by my side
Still thinking its there, but soon I know its gone

I remember your whisper, hearing it again
Then the sky went black again
I remember your whisper, hearing it again
Then the sky went black again
(Crying)
I remember the days of old
The days of holding your hand
Walking along side of you
Someday, I hope everything will be fine again

You're drifting away
Its been so long
Since you've been here by my side
Still thinking its there, but soon I know
You're drifting away
Its been so long
Since you've been here by my side
Still thinking its there, but soon I know, I know its gone
Bryan(me)-Your Whisper (Drifting Away)

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Thats a song I wrote awhile ago while I was going through something that was hard to deal with.

And the cool thing about it is, its actually going to be turned into a real song by a band that I am friends with, who are called 'Ruinfate'.
Its going to sound like a mix between Linkin Park/Flaw/Staind

Please tell me what you think of it :)

Rybullet
03-02-2003, 06:57 AM
dude, this song rox!!!!! Nice work man.......... :D

Pinkin Lark
03-02-2003, 06:57 AM
i like it alot! very deep lyrics! sweet job! :)

Bryan
03-02-2003, 08:30 AM
Thanks :)

Will
03-02-2003, 08:43 AM
Dude, that's awesome... Those lyrics rock. I can't wait to hear the actual song, hehe.

Nikki
03-02-2003, 09:43 AM
Every song I've seen posted on here have been top class stuff...this one is no exception. I can actually imagine this one going pretty far-so what are you waiting for??? Get off your a**e and make it big!

(Ok I'm going over the top there...but seriously, it's a good song...nice one :) )

Amy
03-02-2003, 10:20 AM
thats good. have you written any other songs? If you have post them coz they would be cool to hear as well. That song would rock!

Bryan
03-02-2003, 09:13 PM
No one else like it?

:'( :'( :'( :'( :'(





:P

The 'Narf
03-02-2003, 10:05 PM
Very nice! You should really write lyrics for an actual band (if you dont already, of course).

-The 'Narf

[Darken Hybrid]
03-03-2003, 01:50 AM
it's really good. i wanna hear the actual song....

Remasterbated
03-03-2003, 04:07 AM
those lyrics are phat , seriously i agree with everyone , i would love for that to become a song

Bryan
03-13-2003, 02:00 PM
I'm "bumping" this because i'd like 321xero to elaberate on it. I wanna see how many little things he picks out of it that doesnt seem the very best.


:) :P

Will
03-13-2003, 02:15 PM
Originally posted by Chester 76@Mar 13 2003, 09:00 AM
I'm "bumping" this because i'd like 321xero to elaberate on it. I wanna see how many little things he picks out of it that doesnt seem the very best.


:) :P
LOL. :lol: