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Will
03-02-2003, 02:41 AM
"Justify"

(verse 1)
I used to be euphoric
Now I can't find nothin' for it
I can't see my dreams
It's not how it should be
Everything's fallin' apart
I need to get a new start

(chorus)
The weak live only to justify the strong
Just as the
Sun shines only to justify the darkness

(verse 2)
Time is countin' down
I only hope I don't drown
You've been pullin' me under
You've found my one blunder
Everything's fallin' apart
I need to get a new start

(chorus)
The weak live only to justify the strong
Just as the
Sun shines only to justify the

(bridge)
Clock counts down to the end of the day
It's constantly tickin' our life away
There's nothin' we can do to stop it
If only I could stop and drop it
I'd change my life today
And I'd find another way
To deal with the pain I have inside
If only.. if only I could fly

(outro)
The weak live to justify the strong
Just as the
Sun shines only to justify the

Music plays only to justify the silence
Just as
Time clock ticks down to the end of the day

The weak live only the justify the strong
Just as the
Sun shines only to

Just as the
Sun shines only to

Just as the
Sun shines only to justify the darkness

Absolut Xero
03-02-2003, 03:12 AM
:o thats really really good!! :D

Will
03-02-2003, 03:27 AM
Thanks.

Ryan
03-02-2003, 04:29 AM
It sounds pretty cool. But I think the chorus seems too short. Other than that it seems like the lyrics flow pretty smooth.

Pinkin Lark
03-02-2003, 06:58 AM
yea smooth flows i like it

Rybullet
03-02-2003, 06:59 AM
you've got one thing that most songwriters don't have.........Flow..... Nice work..

Pinkin Lark
03-02-2003, 07:00 AM
most do have flow though like akuma, you just got to put your mind to it

Rybullet
03-02-2003, 07:03 AM
Originally posted by 03Meteora03@Mar 2 2003, 07:00 AM
most do have flow though like akuma, you just got to put your mind to it
yea but the beat is usually hard to find....... but the beat in this song is very easy to recognize.......

Pinkin Lark
03-02-2003, 07:04 AM
Originally posted by Rybullet+Mar 1 2003, 11:03 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Rybullet @ Mar 1 2003, 11:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--03Meteora03@Mar 2 2003, 07:00 AM
most do have flow though like akuma, you just got to put your mind to it
yea but the beat is usually hard to find....... but the beat in this song is very easy to recognize....... [/b][/quote]
for beats you got to have alot of imagination like lp they dont have the same style as other rock bands their unique thats why they are the best&#33;

Rybullet
03-02-2003, 07:06 AM
well all I meant was the beat was very easy to recognize, I wasn&#39;t saying that it wasn&#39;t unique or anything.........

Pinkin Lark
03-02-2003, 07:08 AM
Originally posted by Rybullet@Mar 1 2003, 11:06 PM
well all I meant was the beat was very easy to recognize, I wasn&#39;t saying that it wasn&#39;t unique or anything.........
yea i see what your saying

Rybullet
03-02-2003, 07:10 AM
Originally posted by 03Meteora03+Mar 2 2003, 07:08 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (03Meteora03 @ Mar 2 2003, 07:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Rybullet@Mar 1 2003, 11:06 PM
well all I meant was the beat was very easy to recognize, I wasn&#39;t saying that it wasn&#39;t unique or anything.........
yea i see what your saying [/b][/quote]
kool, finally someone understands me.......

Bryan
03-02-2003, 08:35 AM
Seems like it would be cool put to music, good job.

Nikki
03-02-2003, 09:40 AM
Damn you Will that&#39;s just classic.

Like someone else said, you should work on the chorus a little bit-stretch it out a bit *shrugs* I wouldn&#39;t know...I&#39;m only creative when it comes to drawing...not lyrics.

Keep it up mate ;)

Amy
03-02-2003, 10:27 AM
are you, Derek and your friend still going to form a band? If you still are, is that gonna be one of your songs? that would be heaps cool if you did.

*LiNkIn WiTcHy*
03-02-2003, 03:52 PM
it;s really good
you really have something to say
keep it up

PP:KUt
03-02-2003, 03:55 PM
hmm yeah i like it&#33;&#33;&#33; but one thing: i think u could add a few "minor" words to kinda make it flow better, so that one line isnt like really short, just add little words. u prolly dont get what i mean tho&#33;&#33; lol

katja_88
03-02-2003, 08:16 PM
yeah..It&#39;s pretty cool but maybe the chorus is to short..anyway it&#39;s a good one :D

erasethepain
03-02-2003, 11:04 PM
I don&#39;t think you need to make the chorus longer. It all depends on how you sing it, I guess.

The only part of the song I dislike is:


Clock counts down to the end of the day
It&#39;s constantly tickin&#39; our life away


No offense, but thats a rip from In The End. I love the rest of the song, and I&#39;d love to see you put it into a song and play it. You might want to add a few more lines to the verses though. Just depends. The endings pretty long which is pretty damn cool.

Good job, man. Write some more.

Will
03-03-2003, 01:24 AM
Originally posted by J Money@Mar 2 2003, 06:04 PM
I don&#39;t think you need to make the chorus longer. It all depends on how you sing it, I guess.

The only part of the song I dislike is:


Clock counts down to the end of the day
It&#39;s constantly tickin&#39; our life away


No offense, but thats a rip from In The End. I love the rest of the song, and I&#39;d love to see you put it into a song and play it. You might want to add a few more lines to the verses though. Just depends. The endings pretty long which is pretty damn cool.

Good job, man. Write some more.
I took it from "In The End" on purpose. Most of the songs I write have a line from an LP song in them. They inspire me to write what I write.