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.in.the.shadows.
03-08-2005, 08:21 PM
over and over again i hear,
that constant ringing in my ears,
mumbling behind my back,
seize just as i turn to act,

haunting me, forever more,
these words I choose to just ignore,
My mind will be, to them all, shut,
I hold the knife but refuse to cut,

hateful words they say to me,
stinging like a honey bee,
hurting me, this poison burns,
and just to think...this came from words,

running now, I grab the key,
as I unlock the door I do decree,
i'll keep their lethal words at bay,
Never again to on me prey,

Turning now I shut the door,
quoth the raven : nevermore


what do you think? Please Read and Review

*this was written just today about what someone said about me...again*

lpsk8er
03-09-2005, 01:14 AM
Well done.

numbfeeling9
03-10-2005, 01:01 AM
Very well done.

XoX-Jelly_Bean-XoX
03-10-2005, 07:21 PM
Lol Its Great! :lol:

.in.the.shadows.
03-12-2005, 01:45 AM
Thanks Everyone

sickcycle
03-12-2005, 03:13 PM
Thats really freaken good, better than usual! Good job, and I love the line, "To quote the raven, nevermore". One of my favorite poems by my favorite poet, Mr. Poe