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arT saveS
03-08-2005, 02:03 AM
The loving enemy

My love can cure your pain
In doubt?
Do you fear it?
Do you find comfort here
Do you find comfort within…
Do you fear being loved

And in your darkest moments I’ll be here
As the light to guide you to happiness

My love can cure your pain
In doubt?
Do you fear it
Do you find comfort here
Do you find comfort within…

Do you find comfort in pain
Do you find comfort in my pain
Do you find comfort in the crying
The crying of my eyes
Do you find comfort…
Do you find comfort…
Do you find comfort within…

The loving enemy
The loving enemy
The enemy
The enemy
The enemy

I’ve never hidden from you
I’ve never run away
I’ve never done anything to hurt you
Why do you wish to hurt me,
When all I do is love you

The Meaningless Love

The meaningless love
The feverish lust
The boiling hate
Of life that lifts our hearts together
And chokes them
Chokes them until they are nothing
The meaningless love
This world is so cruel

Fuck you and
Fuck your lies and
Fuck this life that
Will bury me when I die

I don’t want my life
Take it away

The creator
Means nothing to me
Fuck god, fuck everything
Fuck this life
It’s a cavity
I don’t want my life
Just take it away

Fuck you and
Fuck your lies and
Fuck this life that
Will bury me when I die

My right…
I don’t want my life

The meaningless love
(It heals)
The meaningless love
(It kills)
The meaningless love
The meaningless love

Love is only memories and feelings
The need to protect another person
A passion to love and hold another

The meaningless love

Satan die geht masse

Hiding in the shadows under the sun
Fall from the earth with no where to run
Enemy, the liar, grip the truth and keep hold
Before lies consume and your soul is sold
Crippling reveries are taking place
His chaotic escape
I’ve lost the faith

Fall from the earth to the hell
Cast into the darkness, a hellish realm
Fall from the heaven unto the hell
And follow the beautiful angel that once fell…

Into light
Into gold
A story is told
Life of a man with no one to hold
Bruised and beaten until life forced him to fold
Collapsed under a spell, this part of the story untold
Life of a man whose heart grew cold as stone
Thrown out of his perfect home

Mirror spits out a familiar face
Creased with wrinkles, yet perfected, create…
The blood that flows and boils inside our veins
A fact, a window of this hate
That swells inside my already chosen fate

Fall from the earth to the hell
And be cast into the darkness, his hellish realm
I’ll turn my back on the heaven to receive the hell
And follow the beautiful angel who once fell…

Into darkness
The crippling hate
Fumes of love ventilate
As the hate escalates
Life of a man with only one to hold
Bruised, beaten, forced to fold
Life of a man who’s heart soars
Chose a different path so the heart began to mold
I escape from this bullshit world

Clutch the truth and never let go
Clutch the belief and choke until blood swells from the throat
And as the fires burn and the cries ignite
Scream out your fears and face the light
Swallow your peace and fall within
Hold on as you give birth to sin
Exhale slowly and silently breath in
The scent of evil blooms,
Evil becomes your home again

A story is told
Life of a man with no one to hold
Love failed him
Life left him
Bruised and beaten until life forced him to fold
Thrown out of his perfect home
Hated and despised he now chases the thrown
Story of a man who cannot die and does not grow old

I

I…
Cry
And I’ll…
Die
I live
I breathe…
In sin
I feed
Just like you I…
Am flesh
And blood
And bone
And if my loved ones die I’ll…
Cry
And if my loved one leaves I’ll…
Die
Now I live
But it’s a sad life.

I cry.
I…
Cry.

I dream.
I…
Dream.

I love.
I…
LOVE.

I bleed.
I…
BLEED.

I fail.
I…
Failed…

DAnnyBozo
03-08-2005, 12:55 PM
You repeat ur self way too much, and '' I '' Is the worst lyrics ive ever heard lmao.

The Doctor
03-08-2005, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by DAnnyBozo@Mar 8 2005, 08:13 AM
You repeat ur self way too much, and '' I '' Is the worst lyrics ive ever heard lmao.
You think you can write something better?

Ivana
03-08-2005, 09:23 PM
It's not that bad.Work harder,and It will be better.





















I hope :chemist:











kidding...

lpsk8er
03-09-2005, 01:13 AM
You just need to edit some stuff and It'll turn out better.

arT saveS
03-09-2005, 03:18 AM
No one is the same. Not everyone will like what I write, and I'm perfectly fine with it. I believe what I wrote is fine, so I won't change any of it, but I do appreciate the responses.

Omar A
03-09-2005, 09:18 AM
I fucking love it!

Fuck you and
Fuck your lies and
Fuck this life that
Will bury me when I die

I love this part alot.

Good job man

Evil Angel
03-09-2005, 12:30 PM
The lyrics are quite good.But honestly the "I" lyrics do suck a bit..just IMO

XoX-Jelly_Bean-XoX
03-10-2005, 07:23 PM
Yeha I agree With Danny...You're Too Repetitive..And Danny DiD Write A Better Song its Called Look into The Mirroer..Check it Out Its Really Good :)

sickcycle
03-11-2005, 04:31 PM
OK, I don't know what everyone's deal is, but the Satan one is really damn good, I love the opening

"Hiding in the shadows under the sun
Fall from the earth with no where to run
Enemy, the liar, grip the truth and keep hold
Before lies consume and your soul is sold
Crippling reveries are taking place
His chaotic escape
I’ve lost the faith"

Absolutly love that part, infact the whole song/poem is very sound. Now the "I" one is a bit repetitive, but its not totally "sucky". I like the style, its diferent and I aplaud you for that, but yes, you do need to work on putting some more words in there to make it have a less perpetual feel.