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Luke/Hellflame
02-24-2005, 09:43 PM
Until you came,my life was shit
Gettin cheated on by that katie bitch
Getting on the other side of racist fists
Getting lost in one big spiritual mist
I guess everything happens for a reason though
Had I not been cheated on I wouldn't be with you
I wouldn't love you like I love you so
And nothing will take that away from me at all
But the winter almost came and killed my soul
When I heard you'd been rushed into hospital
I almost fell to my knees in tears after that call
Fuck you winter you almost killed my girl

The winter brought bad luck for you
And without you what would I do
Girl I don't know if you even have a clue
How much I love you

On valentines day while you were asleep
I put on your cabinet a card and some expensive sweets
I kept on gazing at the screen the measures your heartbeat
Just hoping to god that it wouldn't freeze
For 24 hours I waited there
Telling myself how this was so unfair
And without you I just couldn't bare
And I'll never see the wind blow through your golden hair
I'll never be able to gaze into your eyes
I just kept telling myself that life is a lie
How can I god let my only happiness die?
How could you kill such an innocent life?

The winter brought bad luck for you
And without you what would I do
Girl I don't know if you even have a clue
How much I love you

And without you by my side
I'd probably lose control
I'd lose all my mind
Sarah this is dedicated to you

Your finally awake
I can see thse pretty eyes again
Girl please listen to me
Never make me cry like that again

Never leave my side again
Never let me cry again
Never scare me like that again
Put happiness in my life again...

The winter brought bad luck for you
And without you what would I do
Girl I don't know if you even have a clue
How much I love you

And without you by my side
I'd probably lose control
I'd lose all my mind
Sarah this is dedicated to you

The winter brought bad luck for you
And without you what would I do
Girl I don't know if you even have a clue
How much I love you
Sarah this is dedicated to you

lpsk8er
02-24-2005, 11:37 PM
Sounds nice!

Jamie
02-24-2005, 11:51 PM
Awsome

esaul17
02-25-2005, 09:49 PM
Is that a true story? Either way good job, had some kind of a nice flow too it.

Luke/Hellflame
02-25-2005, 10:12 PM
Yeah its true :(

But she's coming out of hospital tommorow!!!! ^_^ :)

Thanks for the comments ^_^

More would be great :)

.in.the.shadows.
02-25-2005, 10:15 PM
best of luck for the both of you. Hopefully everything will be fine. Give your girlfriend a big GET WELL SOON from everyone at the LPA and best wishes for a speedy recovery. I'll keep you in my prayers.

Luke/Hellflame
02-26-2005, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by .in.the.shadows.@Feb 25 2005, 10:33 PM
best of luck for the both of you. Hopefully everything will be fine. Give your girlfriend a big GET WELL SOON from everyone at the LPA and best wishes for a speedy recovery. I'll keep you in my prayers.
Aww thanks :)

Ivana
02-26-2005, 11:13 AM
This is sooooo wonderfull :thumbsup:

my sister likes it too

Luke/Hellflame
02-26-2005, 02:48 PM
Thank you :)

When sarah comes back I'm gonna ask my band to play some tabs for the song and I'm gonna sing it

cindy_lp
02-27-2005, 01:55 AM
How sweet! I hope she's okay now. I bet it'd be a very good song with the lyrics and I bet she'd love it if your band put something together with it for her.

notneo
02-27-2005, 03:16 AM
Is that true? Either ways its darn good.

esaul17
02-27-2005, 03:20 AM
Ya I asked him that too (you can see it above). It is true and she just got out of the hospital.

Dedicated
02-27-2005, 11:26 AM
Wow. That's really powerful. I'm glad Sarah's better ^_^

Luke/Hellflame
02-27-2005, 12:56 PM
Thanks for all the comments.My band played some tabs for these lyrics while I sang the song for sarah,she was very pleased :) ,I also showed her last night how many nice people were concerned about her in the LPA and she said she might sign up :)

Ztarduzt
02-27-2005, 02:35 PM
nice that she signs up :)
and good lyrics.. maybe a bit too realistic..
but very good though.. wish i could come up with lyrics like that ;)

Luke/Hellflame
02-27-2005, 05:51 PM
Thanks for all the comments ^_^

Matt
02-27-2005, 11:43 PM
Awesome. BTW, what happened to her, anyway?

Luke/Hellflame
02-28-2005, 04:13 PM
Originally posted by _Matt_@Feb 28 2005, 12:01 AM
Awesome. BTW, what happened to her, anyway?
She caught a rare kind of pnumonia-they originaly didn't know wether it was serious or not but shes ok now :)

Thanks for the comments everyone ^_^

Ivana
03-01-2005, 01:59 PM
I'm glad she's ok now :)

Luke/Hellflame
03-01-2005, 04:49 PM
Originally posted by eva reanimated@Mar 1 2005, 02:17 PM
I'm glad she's ok now :)
Thanks ^_^

Graphicfoot
03-02-2005, 11:35 AM
wow that was such a nice poem really cool ^_^ i hope i could rite something like this!!!!you know your girl is really lucky to have you as a boyfriend!!!!!!
:) strangelo0m

sickcycle
03-02-2005, 02:08 PM
good song, nice to see you care for your girl so much, and have so much dedication, yeah like everyone else said, hope she gets better so she can give you a big hug and kiss for this, i know i would, i mean, i'm not gay, but, um, erm, whatever nice song man.

Luke/Hellflame
03-02-2005, 04:33 PM
Thanks alot for all the comments everyone,Sarah got out of hospital on saturday afternoon and she is doing fine,shes on a daily medication and can't atend school for a while (which gives me the crappy task of bringing her her work :angry: :lol: ) and I showed her some of the comments wishing us both the best on the computer and she said you're all very nice people and I couldn't agree more

Thank you so much people ^_^

sickcycle
03-07-2005, 02:43 AM
thats great to hear, well think of it this way man, now you have a good exscuse to go to her house, her bedroom, and a, give her her homework, more time you can spend with her. ;) ;) ;)

Luke/Hellflame
03-07-2005, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by sickcycle@Mar 7 2005, 03:01 AM
thats great to hear, well think of it this way man, now you have a good exscuse to go to her house, her bedroom, and a, give her her homework, more time you can spend with her. ;) ;) ;)
:lol:

XoX-Jelly_Bean-XoX
03-10-2005, 07:19 PM
Holy man Thast Sad...Love Da Lyrics...Hope Sarah Is Okay ^_^

Luke/Hellflame
03-10-2005, 09:04 PM
Thanks ^_^