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.in.the.shadows.
02-24-2005, 06:59 PM
I can smell the darkness,
drawing itself nearer to my very soul,
taking me captive,
hiding me in the shadowed jail,
waiting,
watching,
i've given it a figure,
the lights dim out further as the wind whistles louder in my ears,
behind the iron bars of my mind,
i am held prisoner,
until the sun can set me free


not my best but i think it's ok. Please read and review.

Messy Marj
02-24-2005, 07:07 PM
That's very short...but tight I must say.
I enjoyed reading it. :)

a life in ashes
03-03-2005, 06:33 PM
short but sweet.

Hybrid Meteora
03-07-2005, 04:03 PM
short, but good..

XoX-Jelly_Bean-XoX
03-10-2005, 07:26 PM
Yeah...Lol I'm Not Gunna Say It's Short..ven though it is because everyone else did but i like it..!!!