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Dedicated
02-18-2005, 09:18 PM
This is just a short piece that I just finished writing. Hope you like it.

"Years Pass, Times Change"

You know since last time I think we've both come a long way,
Even though it was only in September,
It's been just over 5 months,
Did I even see you in December?
When did you start liking me again?
Or have you ever stopped since then?
I guess I've been round and I'm at the start again.

You know since last time I think we've both come a long way,
I'm more mature, you don't think I'm gay,
I've wanted to do this since December,
Through to April, now it's November,
You know how time flies by so quickly,
Those memories tasted so sickly,
Almost a year ago and everything has changed around.

Luke/Hellflame
02-18-2005, 10:23 PM
Slightly different from your usual style,good nonetheless :)

Jamie
02-19-2005, 12:14 PM
Cool as ever

Messy Marj
02-19-2005, 07:18 PM
Uuuhm, I like your other style better I think, but it's still good though ^_^

lpsk8er
02-19-2005, 11:52 PM
Good.

Dedicated
02-21-2005, 08:14 PM
Thanks for the comments :)



Any others? ^_^